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Beat me
Use me
Mentally abuse me
I know you love it
So go ahead
I’m not stopping you
Just make sure I’m dead
Before you finish your little temper tantrum
This time make sure I’m gone
That way after this time
I’ll never have to see another one.
I don’t care anymore
The bruises no longer bother me
I won’t cry anymore
Every time you beat me.
Throw me up against the wall
Tell me what a bad person I am
Hit me in the face one more time
Make fun of me for every time I ran
I’m waiting for your yells and screams
Just waiting for you to have a few more beers
Go ahead, do what you want
Release all my hate, sadness, and fears.
Well I hope you had fun tonight
I’ll see you tomorrow, same place and time.
Bring a few more beers to drink tomorrow
And I promise I’ll tell everyone I’m fine.
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Beat Me

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hit me
Beat me
Use me
Mentally abuse me
I know you love it
So go ahead
I’m not stopping you
Just make sure I’m dead
Before you finish your little temper tantrum
This time make sure I’m gone
That way after this time
I’ll never have to see another one.
I don’t care anymore
The bruises no longer bother me
I won’t cry anymore
Every time you beat me.
Throw me up against the wall
Tell me what a bad person I am
Hit me in the face one more time
Make fun of me for every time I ran
I’m waiting for your yells and screams
Just waiting for you to have a few more beers
Go ahead, do what you want
Release all my hate, sadness, and fears.
Well I hope you had fun tonight
I’ll see you tomorrow, same place and time.
Bring a few more beers to drink tomorrow
And I promise I’ll tell everyone I’m fine.

Copyright Â© blackfire9786 ... [ 2003-10-17 15:19:56]
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Re: Beat Me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:26:37 PM AEST
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Been through this growing up
been through this in my marriage.
im here for you ,if you ever want to talk
if you want advice i will give it whenever you need it..
here is a HUG...

Re: Beat Me (User Rating: 1 )
by stephierose on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 10:27:08 PM AEST
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I can completely understand this poem, It's almost like you know exactly how I feel! I went through this when i was growing up, it was really hard! I am so proud you could share this people!
Stephanie aka stephierose

Re: Beat Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:35:02 AM AEST
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i am sorry. . i wish people didn't have to go though this in life. if i could find away to stop it i would. my friend went though this in school. she told me her parents hit her for no reason. one day i didn't see her in school. i asked to use the phone to call my mom so i called her they said she was at the hospital. i asked what four? they said well when she was swiming she ruin though the house and fill down stairs. i said oh well can i see her they said no. i said well than i'll call they said be my guest. well i had called her. she said that it's wasn't true. i said what do you want me to do about it. she said well if you was in this boat that i am in i would call someone. i said i don't want you being taken away from your parents. she said trisha i wake up everyday worrying if i will lose my own life because my parents take it out on me. than i said something to a close teacher and she helped her. she come back a month later and told me she has new parents that love her. i said you're not mad at me she said no you just help me get away. every since than i haven't seen her. i wish i could to see how her new life was?

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