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Array ( [sid] => 25204 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing Myself [time] => 2003-10-17 03:20:18 [hometext] => Kinda not feeling the optimistic side of this one...... [bodytext] => I am losing my mind,
And can not take this anymore.
I will go to my room,
and lock the door.

I sit on my bed,
Stare at the wall.
I can only think,
'Why not end it all?'

I look at a bottle,
Sitting across the way.
I know that if I do this,
There will be Hell to pay.

Still I pick up the bottle,
Maybe I will take a few down,
Then lie on the bed
Waiting for death to come around.

But then I think about our love,
How you treated me.
Are you really worth it??
Why not let things be??

So I put the bottle down,
I know these will not ease my pain.
Now that I have seen the light,
I know that I will see a better day. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Kalika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Losing Myself

Contributed by Kalika on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:20:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I am losing my mind,
And can not take this anymore.
I will go to my room,
and lock the door.

I sit on my bed,
Stare at the wall.
I can only think,
'Why not end it all?'

I look at a bottle,
Sitting across the way.
I know that if I do this,
There will be Hell to pay.

Still I pick up the bottle,
Maybe I will take a few down,
Then lie on the bed
Waiting for death to come around.

But then I think about our love,
How you treated me.
Are you really worth it??
Why not let things be??

So I put the bottle down,
I know these will not ease my pain.
Now that I have seen the light,
I know that I will see a better day.

Copyright © Kalika ... [ 2003-10-17 03:20:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:14:30 AM AEST
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This has hope Kal! Keep that hope! I was glad to see that hope at the end. Was a great write. Take care.

Emma.

Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by TearS on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:17:31 AM AEST
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!Good Write!!!

Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:08:50 AM AEST
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You are so very right...you will see a better day. I have been there and only recently realized the reason I was suicidal or actually I should say the person I was suicidal over was not worth my pain and tears. Your day will come when you feel totally at ease and once again, you will be happy. A very emotional write.
-hugz-stacey

Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:03:44 AM AEST
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I believe you can get though this. I mean take a step better every day.

Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 12:09:25 PM AEST
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An impressive write. It's always good not to lose hope, this way you won't be losing yourself. Stay well!
Saira

Re: Losing Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:18:41 PM AEST
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I'm glad you put the bottle down a great poem loved the hope at the end.

Bobo (Joel)

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