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Array ( [sid] => 25176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wishing You Were Here [time] => 2003-10-16 18:54:52 [hometext] => I just wrote this one day because I was bored. Haha! Look how badly it turned out! *In bad mood...don't ask* [bodytext] => Your so far away
I really don't know what to do
But I do want to say
That I wish you were here and I love you
Each day I write a new poem about our love
But it keeps getting harder and harder to write
I know our love is serious
But its starting to fade out of my sight
I don't like to cry at night
But I don't know what your doing or where you are
I try to hold my tears with all my might
But I can't cause your away, to far
I don't mean to not trust you
But I've been hurt to many times
Its just a regular thing I do
Until I truely know your mine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Breezer08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Wishing You Were Here

Contributed by Breezer08 on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 06:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your so far away
I really don't know what to do
But I do want to say
That I wish you were here and I love you
Each day I write a new poem about our love
But it keeps getting harder and harder to write
I know our love is serious
But its starting to fade out of my sight
I don't like to cry at night
But I don't know what your doing or where you are
I try to hold my tears with all my might
But I can't cause your away, to far
I don't mean to not trust you
But I've been hurt to many times
Its just a regular thing I do
Until I truely know your mine

Copyright © Breezer08 ... [ 2003-10-16 18:54:52]
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Re: Wishing You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticbliss on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:10:59 PM AEST
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Did you get it all figured out? I enjoyed your mood. It was good... even though you wrote it when you were in a bad mood. Sometimes that is when I feel most inspired.

Re: Wishing You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:12:23 AM AEST
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You wrote it quite well. I really love it!
Saira

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