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Array ( [sid] => 25153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hand in hand [time] => 2003-10-16 11:12:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Neither of us is a millionaire,
Truth to tell I don't care,
With you I just feel grand,
Right now, hand in hand.

Never gonna be a great sport,
How to throw, was not taught,
When the boys get in a huddle,
Only want you and me to cuddle.

Alas, not a glitzy movie star,
No shiny teeth or massive car,
Don't want an Oscar on the shelf,
Just want you for myself.

We're not pretty nor are we thin,
Got the makings of a double chin,
But without you I'd be a mug,
Need you in my life to have and hug.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jonteD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Hand in hand

Contributed by jonteD on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Neither of us is a millionaire,
Truth to tell I don't care,
With you I just feel grand,
Right now, hand in hand.

Never gonna be a great sport,
How to throw, was not taught,
When the boys get in a huddle,
Only want you and me to cuddle.

Alas, not a glitzy movie star,
No shiny teeth or massive car,
Don't want an Oscar on the shelf,
Just want you for myself.

We're not pretty nor are we thin,
Got the makings of a double chin,
But without you I'd be a mug,
Need you in my life to have and hug..

Copyright © jonteD ... [ 2003-10-16 11:12:52]
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Re: Hand in hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 01:05:01 PM AEST
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Awwww this is such a sweet poem! I love how it's so innocent, for it's true, love is an innocent emotion- tender, vulnerable. You did a fabulous job at getting that idea of love through with being smutty (you know what I mean.... wink) =) It's just such a delicate little write, I love it!

Re: Hand in hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 04:20:02 PM AEST
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Awww, this is so beautiful.
A great write, thankyou.

Re: Hand in hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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Awww Jon, this is really sweet... Was that ME you were describing in the last verse?? :>)
You know, the double chins etc... hehe
Anyways, I really loved this...Thanks
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Hand in hand (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 11:45:15 PM AEST
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very pretty, sounds like its heart to heart too, hugs n' love nessa

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