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Array ( [sid] => 25073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark angel [time] => 2003-10-15 08:07:06 [hometext] => you may not like it, but plz. read it with an open mind.... [bodytext] => there you are again
though you are not my friend
you come in and out of my life
my heart tries hard to mend.

i see the dark angel comming
who does he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.

i know you are a leader
you are a messenger of death
one i can not stop
as you take away their last breath.

i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine oce more.

i hold a high respect for you
you do your job so well
protecting some who are good
and leading some to hell.

i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.

the dark angel is comming
it´s time for me to go
forgive me for my sins
take away my sorrow. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kolbrun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dark angel

Contributed by kolbrun on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 08:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

there you are again
though you are not my friend
you come in and out of my life
my heart tries hard to mend.

i see the dark angel comming
who does he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.

i know you are a leader
you are a messenger of death
one i can not stop
as you take away their last breath.

i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine oce more.

i hold a high respect for you
you do your job so well
protecting some who are good
and leading some to hell.

i see the dark angel comming
who has he come for
i see the dark angel go
with a friend of mine once more.

the dark angel is comming
it´s time for me to go
forgive me for my sins
take away my sorrow.

Copyright Â© kolbrun ... [ 2003-10-15 08:07:06]
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Re: Dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 09:30:46 AM AEST
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I don't understand how any one could not like this, I think it is brilliant. So well written and very emotional. It paints pictures in your mind, I loved it, I really did.

Re: Dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 03:48:30 PM AEST
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I don't know who the dark angel is but in any case I loved the line structure in this. Great poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:19:39 PM AEST
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I also don't see how anyone could not like this. A truly excellent write. Keep it up!

~ Moonlit

Re: Dark angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:16:27 AM AEST
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I really liked this. Great write

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