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Array ( [sid] => 24979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => let go [time] => 2003-10-13 17:34:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => striving for the next step
around the corner
out of sight
out of breath
reason has fled
sunlight fails
and sets against
paling sky in retreat
virtual hand of time
stops ticking
talking back
or is that my heartbeat
repeating thunder
incongruous
degenerate lover
why
talk that way
leave me alone
leave me alone
quick look over my shoulder
shadows
waving back at me
mocking
dancing with delight
daring me
daring
to speak to strangers
who knows
what danger
who knows
anything at all
altered
changed
after the last carnage
completely ignored
range of emtions
preempted
let go of me
i said
let go

gmm2003
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

let go

Contributed by Merry on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 05:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

striving for the next step
around the corner
out of sight
out of breath
reason has fled
sunlight fails
and sets against
paling sky in retreat
virtual hand of time
stops ticking
talking back
or is that my heartbeat
repeating thunder
incongruous
degenerate lover
why
talk that way
leave me alone
leave me alone
quick look over my shoulder
shadows
waving back at me
mocking
dancing with delight
daring me
daring
to speak to strangers
who knows
what danger
who knows
anything at all
altered
changed
after the last carnage
completely ignored
range of emtions
preempted
let go of me
i said
let go

gmm2003

Copyright © Merry ... [ 2003-10-13 17:34:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:43:40 PM AEST
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I know this feeling well ... great words - the flow builds and takes you to a great ending .... Jan

Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Philipa on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:47:35 PM AEST
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Very powerful write. Good flow and suspence. Thanks for sharing merry.

Philipa
SVS

Re: let go (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 08:00:20 PM AEST
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Get out of my head, there isnt room enough for the both of us. ;o)

Well done my friend...

Larry

Re: let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:39:35 PM AEST
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this moves right along, I could have read more. Crow

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