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Array ( [sid] => 24968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely Weeper [time] => 2003-10-13 14:21:46 [hometext] => No rude comments on this one. It was hard for me to write it...I don't need people degrading it. [bodytext] => Crystals form in the blink of a crying eye.
Falling fast to shatter on the ground with no reason why.
A lonely weeper perched on her window sill.
Every night, its like a repeating drill.
Long ago, she had a reason to weep,
Long ago, at night, she couldn't sleep.
No matter what she did, the memories were still there.
She would cry and cry screaming "It's not fair!"
Why scare me while I'm awake and haunt me while I dream?
I thought you were kind but you are just down right mean!
One day your haunting will bring my life to an end.
I'll die with a broken heart that won't be able to mend.
Years passed and he finally let her be,
But there is part of this picture you didn't see.
The lonely weeper passed away,
And even till this rainy day,
She is trapped and tortured for all eternity.
This lonely weeper is me, unfortunately [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Breezer08 [notes] => Edited by mod_7 14th Oct. minor spacing and spelling error [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Lonely Weeper

Contributed by Breezer08 on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 02:21:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Crystals form in the blink of a crying eye.
Falling fast to shatter on the ground with no reason why.
A lonely weeper perched on her window sill.
Every night, its like a repeating drill.
Long ago, she had a reason to weep,
Long ago, at night, she couldn't sleep.
No matter what she did, the memories were still there.
She would cry and cry screaming "It's not fair!"
Why scare me while I'm awake and haunt me while I dream?
I thought you were kind but you are just down right mean!
One day your haunting will bring my life to an end.
I'll die with a broken heart that won't be able to mend.
Years passed and he finally let her be,
But there is part of this picture you didn't see.
The lonely weeper passed away,
And even till this rainy day,
She is trapped and tortured for all eternity.
This lonely weeper is me, unfortunately




Copyright © Breezer08 ... [ 2003-10-13 14:21:46]
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Re: Lonely Weeper (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:38:24 PM AEST
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that was beautiful...I dont know how anyone could write anything bad about it...it was very well written. Very sad...I hope that you keep writing cause I would love to read more.


Re: Lonely Weeper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 10:11:12 PM AEST
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I agree with hope...this is a very beautifil write and anyone who left a bad comment would have to be blind. I loved this poem and can relate to it alot. I hope things go uphill from here for you and I wish you laughter and joy...
Stacey


Re: Lonely Weeper (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:26:25 AM AEST
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OH MY! This was absolutely terrific! Not one bad word needs to be said. I can definately relate. You used excellent words to describe torture and lonliness. Excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.

Emma.




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