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Array ( [sid] => 24965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => brings me up brings me down [time] => 2003-10-13 13:32:30 [hometext] => short poem about people changing [bodytext] => people changing all around,
brings me up brings me down.
closer together, farther apart,
ending at the start,

tearing away,
day by day,
motion sickness,
defying thickness.

no longer friends?
is it coming to the ends?
no speaking, no words,
no emails, no forwards

last hi,
final goodbye,
people change all around.
brings me up, brings me down.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => frozensuicide [notes] => (Edited by Mod_1) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

brings me up brings me down

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:32:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

people changing all around,
brings me up brings me down.
closer together, farther apart,
ending at the start,

tearing away,
day by day,
motion sickness,
defying thickness.

no longer friends?
is it coming to the ends?
no speaking, no words,
no emails, no forwards

last hi,
final goodbye,
people change all around.
brings me up, brings me down.

Copyright © frozensuicide ... [ 2003-10-13 13:32:30]
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Re: brings me up brings me down (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 06:55:57 PM AEST
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this was good, but ppl always change I hope that whoever this was to that u guys remain friends.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: brings me up brings me down (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:35:35 AM AEST
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Yeah wether you change or your friend...it happens. Just hope you do stay friends or if not get closure...get a goodbye...I didn't. Good poem.

Emma.

Re: brings me up brings me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Evanescencefreak on Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:36:43 AM AEST
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I think this is really good and I know that change can be hard but remember; somethings good things fall apart so great things can come together. Its still awesome even if I got the message all wrong.

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