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Array ( [sid] => 24957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Erase The Pain [time] => 2003-10-13 10:44:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Erase the pain

The tears running down my face
Tears falling to the ground
When will this pain go away?
When will it stop?

I cant breath
Catch me if I faint
Take me away from this place
The pain is too much.please erase

Erase this pain falling from my face
This pain I seem to embrace
I need to close my eyes and erase
Dream of a better place

Come dream with me and loose reality
Close your eyes and dream with me
Dream of good and erase the pain
Comfort me so I dont go insane

Let me get lost inside your eyes
To forget time and realize
That this pain shouldnt be real
Just take it away
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Erase The Pain

Contributed by Amora on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 10:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Erase the pain

The tears running down my face
Tears falling to the ground
When will this pain go away?
When will it stop?

I cant breath
Catch me if I faint
Take me away from this place
The pain is too much.please erase

Erase this pain falling from my face
This pain I seem to embrace
I need to close my eyes and erase
Dream of a better place

Come dream with me and loose reality
Close your eyes and dream with me
Dream of good and erase the pain
Comfort me so I dont go insane

Let me get lost inside your eyes
To forget time and realize
That this pain shouldnt be real
Just take it away

Copyright © Amora ... [ 2003-10-13 10:44:29]
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Re: Erase The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 01:07:47 PM AEST
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A fine write, I like your style.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Re: Erase The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 02:13:40 AM AEST
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Oh I can relate! Excellent poem!!!! I really liked it! Take care.

Emma.

Re: Erase The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:37:03 AM AEST
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If I could I would. I can only offer you the gift of friendship. And I do.
Take care.
David

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