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Array ( [sid] => 24912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => full of empty [time] => 2003-10-12 17:40:43 [hometext] => this is a song- but i can't write music- so i can't show you how it should sound [bodytext] => i wanna be full
i wanna be full
i wanna be full
of being empty
i wanna feel good
i wanna feel good
in my pain
in my pain
in my pain

i wanna be built up-
by cutting down
i wanna be happy
when you make me sad
i wanna be complete
when you're shooting holes right through
make me mad
make me sad
i'll be happy

i wanna be high
i wanna be high
i wanna be high
from drinking water
i wanna be hot
i wanna be hot
but i'm cold
i'm cold
i'm cold

i wanna be-- your everything
your perfect little angel
that's what i got ta be
be your-- your everything
the sugar in your coffee
your dreams when you sleep

i wanna be perfect
i wanna be perfect
i wanna be perfect
for you
slit my wrists
slit my wrists
if i fail
if i fail
if i fail

i wanna be--your everything [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 34 [informant] => fayeelizibeth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

full of empty

Contributed by fayeelizibeth on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

i wanna be full
i wanna be full
i wanna be full
of being empty
i wanna feel good
i wanna feel good
in my pain
in my pain
in my pain

i wanna be built up-
by cutting down
i wanna be happy
when you make me sad
i wanna be complete
when you're shooting holes right through
make me mad
make me sad
i'll be happy

i wanna be high
i wanna be high
i wanna be high
from drinking water
i wanna be hot
i wanna be hot
but i'm cold
i'm cold
i'm cold

i wanna be-- your everything
your perfect little angel
that's what i got ta be
be your-- your everything
the sugar in your coffee
your dreams when you sleep

i wanna be perfect
i wanna be perfect
i wanna be perfect
for you
slit my wrists
slit my wrists
if i fail
if i fail
if i fail

i wanna be--your everything

Copyright © fayeelizibeth ... [ 2003-10-12 17:40:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: full of empty (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:02:33 PM AEST
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Oh how much i wanna hear how it sounds.. this is such a powerful, romantic, beautiful poem/song.. im sure the repetition would sound lovely in the song. wow, im stunned by this. amazing!!!
x_x_x

Re: full of empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:35:26 PM AEST
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i think it has potential as a song - and i am a songwriter

merry

Re: full of empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Philipa on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:56:51 PM AEST
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I can hear the backup from the Red Hot Chilly Peppers. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

Philipa

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