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Array ( [sid] => 24907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => innocence lost [time] => 2003-10-12 16:42:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My life is forever altered
I will never be the same
One day I was sweet and innocent
The next I was forever ruined

Its because of you I feel this way
My life you took from me
So young and impressionable I was
Forced to grow up young

You told me I had to obey
No one would understand
You said if I told
I would only be hated

Sometimes you even brought your friends
It was all a game to you
We played truth or dare
You didn’t care about my pain

I cried, I begged, I pleaded
You would not stop
Until that ever faithful day
Finally you were caught

Although I was only eight
The blame was put on me
I could see the hate in their eyes
As even than they beat me

If only you would of left me alone
I might be free from these demons
Instead oh brother of mine
You took my virginity.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 6 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

innocence lost

Contributed by mercedes on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:42:39 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My life is forever altered
I will never be the same
One day I was sweet and innocent
The next I was forever ruined

Its because of you I feel this way
My life you took from me
So young and impressionable I was
Forced to grow up young

You told me I had to obey
No one would understand
You said if I told
I would only be hated

Sometimes you even brought your friends
It was all a game to you
We played truth or dare
You didn’t care about my pain

I cried, I begged, I pleaded
You would not stop
Until that ever faithful day
Finally you were caught

Although I was only eight
The blame was put on me
I could see the hate in their eyes
As even than they beat me

If only you would of left me alone
I might be free from these demons
Instead oh brother of mine
You took my virginity.

Copyright Â© mercedes ... [ 2003-10-12 16:42:39]
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Re: innocence lost (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST
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Wow this really hit home...I could feel your anger.

Re: innocence lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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OMG!! A touching write on such a sad topic. I hope that you have found some peace and was able to deal with this pain...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: innocence lost (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:59:48 PM AEST
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keep writing.....let it all out......great job!!!

Re: innocence lost (User Rating: 1 )
by symptom_recital on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:08:46 AM AEST
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A really great write. No one should have to go through such a painful experience, you expressed your anger and hurt perfectly. Thankyou for posting.

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