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Is there though no one can see.
the pain inside of me,
Is there,and always will be.

Though no one cares,
It is always there.
The pain is within,
And i just can not win.

It is the pain we all feel,
When we dont know how to deal.
We think we are insane,
When we feel that pain. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ell_03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

the pain inside of me

Contributed by ell_03 on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain inside of me,
Is there though no one can see.
the pain inside of me,
Is there,and always will be.

Though no one cares,
It is always there.
The pain is within,
And i just can not win.

It is the pain we all feel,
When we dont know how to deal.
We think we are insane,
When we feel that pain.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2003-10-11 18:45:39]
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Re: the pain inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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I can relate, nice write

Re: the pain inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:06:26 PM AEST
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This is why we have poetry...tobe able to tell our pains! Write about them and u will feel better! Love:::Kirby

Re: the pain inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:24:36 PM AEST
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just keep writing ....it helps so much with that pain...I know I write my way through it all the time
Shari

Re: the pain inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:04:36 PM AEST
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PAIN why does it take so much away from all?
Yet where would we be without it? sorry about the confusing answer.
This was an awesome poem keep it up.

Re: the pain inside of me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:43:15 PM AEST
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very well wrote yes the pain inside is deep and i to fear tolet out the pain the pain of not knowing what lays deep down great poetry you have wrote
good luck in all you do

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