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Array ( [sid] => 24818 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one more tear [time] => 2003-10-11 00:41:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => one more tear
stumbles and falls
careening, careless
to my feet
one more hopeless
love pursued
one more rejection
so incomplete

one more tear
this world has brought me
one more fight
i cannot win
one more drop
into the ocean
of liquid woe
that i'm drowning in

one more night
i lie, sleepless
praying for the courage
to stop this pain
one more night
i feel so worthless
still too scared
to cut the vein

one more weakness
found within me
once more i fail
an easy test
one more tear
so insignificant
falls to pool
with all the rest [comments] => 6 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

one more tear

Contributed by Cancer on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:41:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

one more tear
stumbles and falls
careening, careless
to my feet
one more hopeless
love pursued
one more rejection
so incomplete

one more tear
this world has brought me
one more fight
i cannot win
one more drop
into the ocean
of liquid woe
that i'm drowning in

one more night
i lie, sleepless
praying for the courage
to stop this pain
one more night
i feel so worthless
still too scared
to cut the vein

one more weakness
found within me
once more i fail
an easy test
one more tear
so insignificant
falls to pool
with all the rest

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-10-11 00:41:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 01:09:07 AM AEST
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Hi cancer,
I'm always concerned when I read something like this as I've battled these thoughts a lifetime but anyone that can write as good as u can has mucho reason to get up after the tears and write.
It's amazing that before i read this I was just thinking how being a writer cleans my soul and helps others along the way. See this is my purpose here to reach down into the stuff others run from and turn it into something good.
With your writting u will find out that we all have our tears. How else can we relate 2 write.
I use 2 think, don't I ever get a break? But now I have the breaks and I cherish God loaning me this talent to use so. I cherish it and it gives me all the reasons I need to keep on keeping on.
Hang in there and keep turning those tears into masterpeices as U have much talent!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:42:33 AM AEST
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so insignificant.....great line.....awesome lonely
write!!!!!!

Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 04:24:49 AM AEST
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OMG ... this poem of yours has said everything I could ever say ... and you have written it with such perfection ...

In awe ....

Jan

Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:26:14 AM AEST
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Your poem touched me so deeply...so sad and written so excellently, it is truly full of emotion. I definately feel this write. Take care now okay.

Emma.

Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:48:23 AM AEST
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wow t his was tough to read it spoke to me deeply. A beautiful write man. I seem to have missed some of your latest poems I have some catchin up to do!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: one more tear (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:51:38 AM AEST
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wonderfully written.. i like this alot.
~sara~

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