Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 19:53:35 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 24800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Mother's Unsurpassed Love [time] => 2003-10-10 21:29:22 [hometext] => A very wise King knows the sacrificing love of a Mother, and takes advantage of this knowledge to render a Just Judgment! [bodytext] =>

In a land far removed across the sea.
not viewed by you and me.
A young Jewish Man, started to reign
as King, in the year 1037 BCE.

His name was Solomon.
In Hebrew his name is "hard-won!"
for it also means "Peace," out-done!
This, matched with his extreme intelligence.
Not another, could even come close....
Not even one!

He was only 12 years old,
when the grave reponsibility
of King would unfold!
Over 2 Million Jews to him subject.
He must daily judge and check!

His marvelous wisdom was renowned!
Reputation world 'round!
Queen Sheba paid a formal visit.
She traveled from South West Arabia,
from the ends of the earth to see him,
demonstate his marvelous worth!

While there, she was invited to sit
as a witness in his court.
Two woman and an infant stand
facing Solomon, with their consort.

Young King Solomon has been forewarned.
But, he allowed them to speak.
The woman holding the child said,
"We both live in the same house, she & I.
I gave birth to a baby boy,
two days later a baby boy was born to her,
but her baby boy would die!"

"She sneaked into my room, while I slept.
Stole my baby boy and replaced it,
with her dead baby as she wept!
When I woke up, I saw the dead baby
next to me, and knew that it was not mine!"

Then the other woman began to plead,
"No!" she said, "The living child is mine!
and the dead baby is hers!"

The first woman once again pleads,
"No!" she screams, "The live baby is mine,
and the dead baby is hers!"

As the two woman cry and plead constantly,
Solomon may wish he could just flee!
Instead, he sends for a Sword!
When it arrives, he orders the living baby
to be cut in half!
The swordsman pleads, "But, My Lord!"
Solomon then says, "Give each Mother a half!

"No!" cries the Real Mother,
"Please, do not kill the baby, give it to this woman!"
"No!" cries the other woman,
"Don't give it to either one of us, go on
cut it in half, as fast as you can!"

Finally Solomon speaks.........
"Do Not Kill the baby, give it back
to the first woman, for I know
she is the Real Mother.
She loves her little son so much,
she is willing to give him away,
so alive he can stay!"

As Queen Sheba watched, she was astonished!
at King Solomon's stupendous wisdom!
And soon she would return to her own Kingdom.
Telling everyone there to listen to what
she had to say..............
"King Solomon is the Wisest,
Most Intelligent King to be found,
anywhere in our day!"

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 10, 2003
Taken from the Bible

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lovingcritters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
A Mother's Unsurpassed Love

Contributed by lovingcritters on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry





In a land far removed across the sea.
not viewed by you and me.
A young Jewish Man, started to reign
as King, in the year 1037 BCE.

His name was Solomon.
In Hebrew his name is "hard-won!"
for it also means "Peace," out-done!
This, matched with his extreme intelligence.
Not another, could even come close....
Not even one!

He was only 12 years old,
when the grave reponsibility
of King would unfold!
Over 2 Million Jews to him subject.
He must daily judge and check!

His marvelous wisdom was renowned!
Reputation world 'round!
Queen Sheba paid a formal visit.
She traveled from South West Arabia,
from the ends of the earth to see him,
demonstate his marvelous worth!

While there, she was invited to sit
as a witness in his court.
Two woman and an infant stand
facing Solomon, with their consort.

Young King Solomon has been forewarned.
But, he allowed them to speak.
The woman holding the child said,
"We both live in the same house, she & I.
I gave birth to a baby boy,
two days later a baby boy was born to her,
but her baby boy would die!"

"She sneaked into my room, while I slept.
Stole my baby boy and replaced it,
with her dead baby as she wept!
When I woke up, I saw the dead baby
next to me, and knew that it was not mine!"

Then the other woman began to plead,
"No!" she said, "The living child is mine!
and the dead baby is hers!"

The first woman once again pleads,
"No!" she screams, "The live baby is mine,
and the dead baby is hers!"

As the two woman cry and plead constantly,
Solomon may wish he could just flee!
Instead, he sends for a Sword!
When it arrives, he orders the living baby
to be cut in half!
The swordsman pleads, "But, My Lord!"
Solomon then says, "Give each Mother a half!

"No!" cries the Real Mother,
"Please, do not kill the baby, give it to this woman!"
"No!" cries the other woman,
"Don't give it to either one of us, go on
cut it in half, as fast as you can!"

Finally Solomon speaks.........
"Do Not Kill the baby, give it back
to the first woman, for I know
she is the Real Mother.
She loves her little son so much,
she is willing to give him away,
so alive he can stay!"

As Queen Sheba watched, she was astonished!
at King Solomon's stupendous wisdom!
And soon she would return to her own Kingdom.
Telling everyone there to listen to what
she had to say..............
"King Solomon is the Wisest,
Most Intelligent King to be found,
anywhere in our day!"

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 10, 2003
Taken from the Bible





Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2003-10-10 21:29:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: A Mother's Unsurpassed Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 11:49:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
well done
Shari


Re: A Mother's Unsurpassed Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 01:51:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This very well known myth,
and this not so far away land,
is much viewed by me
As odd as this might be.


Re: A Mother's Unsurpassed Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:48:55 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
good take on this one!!!!


Re: A Mother's Unsurpassed Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i love the story, Crow




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com