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Boat of suppressed wishes sinking,
Wishes that were stifled…
Before even wished, slowly I’m fading.
Tides are rising higher and higher,
Frantically seeking their way out of me.
Making my insides quake,
Darkening the color of agony.

Shall I dig a hole in my forsaken soul…
To let it out?
If do, I would be dead,
If not, I would be a living dead girl!

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Depressive Depression

Contributed by Saira on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:38:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In an ireful sea of depression,
Boat of suppressed wishes sinking,
Wishes that were stifled…
Before even wished, slowly I’m fading.
Tides are rising higher and higher,
Frantically seeking their way out of me.
Making my insides quake,
Darkening the color of agony.

Shall I dig a hole in my forsaken soul…
To let it out?
If do, I would be dead,
If not, I would be a living dead girl!

Copyright Â© Saira ... [ 2003-10-10 10:38:16]
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Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:45:31 AM AEST
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Your style is to be admired
-----------------------------------
There has to be a better way,
to undepress yourself to day,
Keep looking for the route to joy,
Might simply be a brand new boy...

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 11:40:48 AM AEST
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Your poem is remarkable Saira.
I hope this really is not you,
But if it is dear, I know how much you lean on your creator....take it all to him...leave it with him....he will pull you through!
Love you,
ConSue

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:16:34 PM AEST
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a tough place to be, and it can get worse. you stay strong life changes every minute.
Crow

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:54:17 PM AEST
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Thats sad but very nicely written! The way u have expressed is remarkable!! Good write!

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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sad emotions expressed in a beautiful way. sometimes in ur poetry i find feelings we all go thro at times but dont say it out loud. :)

love-----Nida

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:43:32 PM AEST
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stay strong.........

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 07:47:20 PM AEST
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It seems to be coming from inside me, how true can't live without letting things go, can't live either if let it go entirely. --- kj ( another crab;)

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:01:47 PM AEST
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It seems to be coming from inside me, how true can't live without letting things go, can't live either if let it go entirely. --- kj ( another crab hididng under a rock most of time, then making a dash for it;)

Re: Depressive Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 10:02:15 PM AEST
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I like this one, Saira. "Darkening the color of agony" -- great line!! great metaphor! Please tell me what you think of one i just posted called "The Abyss". thanks!

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