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Array ( [sid] => 24765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Starry Night Feeling [time] => 2003-10-10 09:26:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As we look at the dark blue sky,
We see shooting stars fly.
Then the clouds float by.
Now I cant see that sparkle in your eye,
But you can still see mine.

Now since I cant find the sparkle in your
eyes. We watch the clouds as they disapper,
and the stars show through out the rest of
the night. As we close our eyes and lock our
lips, I find that sparkle within you.

As we look at the dark blue sky again,
We see shooting stars and wish on them.
Still no clouds in our view.
Now I know that sparkle in your eye is new.
My wish upon that shooting star, was to be
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The Starry Night Feeling

Contributed by Twitch06 on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:26:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As we look at the dark blue sky,
We see shooting stars fly.
Then the clouds float by.
Now I cant see that sparkle in your eye,
But you can still see mine.

Now since I cant find the sparkle in your
eyes. We watch the clouds as they disapper,
and the stars show through out the rest of
the night. As we close our eyes and lock our
lips, I find that sparkle within you.

As we look at the dark blue sky again,
We see shooting stars and wish on them.
Still no clouds in our view.
Now I know that sparkle in your eye is new.
My wish upon that shooting star, was to be
with you.

Copyright © Twitch06 ... [ 2003-10-10 09:26:11]
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Re: The Starry Night Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:41:46 AM AEST
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AWWW, this is cute. I really like it. I like it so much. good job twitch. Do you graduate in 06? I am 05!

Re: The Starry Night Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:33:06 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so sweet..... Liked it a lot..
Jenni

Re: The Starry Night Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:32:12 PM AEST
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this is so sweet.......great work!!!! i can see the stars......the velvety night.....

Re: The Starry Night Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 03:10:41 PM AEST
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great write... probably one of the best i have read in a while... keep up the work, you are very good and still very young.. you will be a great writer someday im sure

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