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Array ( [sid] => 24764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Absence Of A Past [time] => 2003-10-10 08:50:12 [hometext] => Dedicated to those who lost their hearts in the flow of love... [bodytext] => When a flower fades away
Something happens inside the garden
Just an empty feeling
Feels so alone,
All the rest of flowers become sad
And so brightness turns to darkness
Everything looks, so quiet
Silent thoughts just pass the life
And one day another flower blooms again
To fill the absence of a past.

When a life turns to fall
Something happens inside the heart
An unbearable feeling
Feels so alone,
The whole world becomes light
And then loneliness locks up the life
Everything looks, so quiet
Waiting becomes a hope
But nothing blooms again
To fill your absence to my existence.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TearS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

An Absence Of A Past

Contributed by TearS on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 08:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When a flower fades away
Something happens inside the garden
Just an empty feeling
Feels so alone,
All the rest of flowers become sad
And so brightness turns to darkness
Everything looks, so quiet
Silent thoughts just pass the life
And one day another flower blooms again
To fill the absence of a past.

When a life turns to fall
Something happens inside the heart
An unbearable feeling
Feels so alone,
The whole world becomes light
And then loneliness locks up the life
Everything looks, so quiet
Waiting becomes a hope
But nothing blooms again
To fill your absence to my existence.

Copyright © TearS ... [ 2003-10-10 08:50:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Absence Of A Past (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 08:56:54 AM AEST
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This poem was..
well..
terrible.

In between your idiotic rambling you succeed in only making us all dumber. May God bless you pathetic soul, and take pity on such a terrible poet, such as yourself.

Re: An Absence Of A Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:02:12 PM AEST
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I love the analogy here...
Jenni

Re: An Absence Of A Past (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:29:33 PM AEST
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first of all.......ignore the very first peon that didn't have the guts to leave their name.....

i love the analogy.....the comparison is good work!!!! waiting becomes a hope.....great!!!

Re: An Absence Of A Past (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:11:44 AM AEST
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It has a real meaning, really...

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