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Trees blowing, rain dripping down the window sill
Catch it, bring down and make it real
You hold something true don't conceal it
So let's lay on my bed...hold each other close
I'll kiss you like I mean it I won't ever leave your side [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tbsbikescene [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Conceal The Deal And Make It Real

Contributed by tbsbikescene on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:18:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Sitting here, concentrating on you
Trees blowing, rain dripping down the window sill
Catch it, bring down and make it real
You hold something true don't conceal it
So let's lay on my bed...hold each other close
I'll kiss you like I mean it I won't ever leave your side




Copyright © tbsbikescene ... [ 2003-10-09 21:18:09]
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Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real (User Rating: 1 )
by TeenageEmoGirl on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:28:19 PM AEST
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love the poem to pieces...also love taking back sunday :) awesome write


Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real (User Rating: 1 )
by TeenageEmoGirl on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:28:26 PM AEST
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love the poem to pieces...also love taking back sunday :) awesome write


Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:02:09 AM AEST
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god.....i wish he'd read me.....i wish he'd say these things.........ah may be someday!!!!!


Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:38:15 PM AEST
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Lovely write... nice picture you've painted..
Jenni




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