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Array ( [sid] => 24683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Five AM's Blessing [time] => 2003-10-09 14:45:24 [hometext] => Woke up early this morning with my lover... watched him sleep for a while, then this came out... [bodytext] => You look so peaceful
Streched out between smooth silk
And soft cashmere
You're safe in this place
Reveling in my warm darkness
As calm as the night's air
As angelic as a child
Your expression is lost in sleep
I could spend eternity here
Just taking you in
Watching your patterned breathing
Life's simple rhythm
Your jaw seems chiseled from stone
Ebony cheeks so high and graceful
Five o'clock's shadow now five am's chore
But it compliments you lovingly
Your lashes reach out to perfection
And your brow slides away like the sun
Your lips are so full and soft
Much softer then this old heart
I wonder what wild dreams play
Beneath your closed eyes
I wonder if I am there
Running with you through fantasy
I kiss you just for comfort
To bless this moment we share
You turn and embrace me in your sleep
Your smile shows I'm always there [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jason_robert_britt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Five AM's Blessing

Contributed by jason_robert_britt on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 02:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You look so peaceful
Streched out between smooth silk
And soft cashmere
You're safe in this place
Reveling in my warm darkness
As calm as the night's air
As angelic as a child
Your expression is lost in sleep
I could spend eternity here
Just taking you in
Watching your patterned breathing
Life's simple rhythm
Your jaw seems chiseled from stone
Ebony cheeks so high and graceful
Five o'clock's shadow now five am's chore
But it compliments you lovingly
Your lashes reach out to perfection
And your brow slides away like the sun
Your lips are so full and soft
Much softer then this old heart
I wonder what wild dreams play
Beneath your closed eyes
I wonder if I am there
Running with you through fantasy
I kiss you just for comfort
To bless this moment we share
You turn and embrace me in your sleep
Your smile shows I'm always there




Copyright © jason_robert_britt ... [ 2003-10-09 14:45:24]
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Re: Five AM's Blessing (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:03:59 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful Jason. :) Great write.


Re: Five AM's Blessing (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 04:36:39 PM AEST
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absolutely breath taking.......as love should be....great work!!!!


Re: Five AM's Blessing (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 07:26:31 PM AEST
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Great Jason more romantic and calm than what u usually write, but very good nonetheless. hope to hear from you soon buddy.

Joel (Bobo)


Re: Five AM's Blessing (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:51:13 AM AEST
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outstanding. a very touching, gentle write. beautifully depicted. great job.

51


Re: Five AM's Blessing (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:57:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful! Couldnt say anything else! its very touching.




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