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Array ( [sid] => 24666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why lie?? [time] => 2003-10-09 04:16:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night is dull,
Emptiness in the sky,
The moon is bright and full,
The Question before me is “why did I lie?”
Thought it would take you high
Little did I know that it would make me sit and cry
But one day it had to die
I sit here with all the guilt
I realize that the trust I had built,
Has been shattered by this act of mine.
My mind is really distressed,
--- but hey I said “sorry”
well don’t forget the faith u have messed
I wonder and realize
I am responsible for committing a crime,
Sins and rewards, both cant be kept
The guilt takes me close to sufferings
Sufferings, I hope make me happy.
Oh But he has forgiven you
He’s no longer angry and blue
The sufferings have been blessed
Those deeds have been pressed
The more I suffer, the better I feel….
The night slowly closes…….

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Why lie??

Contributed by addie on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 04:16:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The night is dull,
Emptiness in the sky,
The moon is bright and full,
The Question before me is “why did I lie?”
Thought it would take you high
Little did I know that it would make me sit and cry
But one day it had to die
I sit here with all the guilt
I realize that the trust I had built,
Has been shattered by this act of mine.
My mind is really distressed,
--- but hey I said “sorry”
well don’t forget the faith u have messed
I wonder and realize
I am responsible for committing a crime,
Sins and rewards, both cant be kept
The guilt takes me close to sufferings
Sufferings, I hope make me happy.
Oh But he has forgiven you
He’s no longer angry and blue
The sufferings have been blessed
Those deeds have been pressed
The more I suffer, the better I feel….
The night slowly closes…….

Copyright Â© addie ... [ 2003-10-09 04:16:52]
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Re: Why lie?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:56:14 AM AEST
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A sad story......... Pretty writing, but sad. I like this one! Don't let this lie get ya down, God ALWAYS forgives if you're sincere =) Great write!

Re: Why lie?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:12:57 AM AEST
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Really touching write....
Jenni

Re: Why lie?? (User Rating: 1 )
by sugarboy on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:21:21 AM AEST
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It's heartbreakingly sad- and I admire the honesty in these words.

Re: Why lie?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST
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Very truthful emotional disclosure-Well done maam--Russ

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