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Array ( [sid] => 24659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Homecoming [time] => 2003-10-08 23:43:34 [hometext] => Just one little dance, don't I deserve it?! [bodytext] => You once asked me for a tear,
A tear I have shed for no one to see,
My hidden tears are just for me,
But I will sacrifice,
One tear for you,
And just for you,
But yet I am so tired,
Because of all this raging in my head,
So tired,
Of never being,
Given just one chance,
With you at all,
You can't imagion,
How much I want you,
I'm sorry for telling you this,
So sorry,
Sorry,
But why can't I have,
Just one chance,
To let our friendship grow,
Just to look into the fallen angels eyes,
Only to let me peer through,
Look deeply into your soul,
It's such a beautiful essence,
And since,
You have accepted,
My glass heart,
Please don't make me,
Fill it with anymore tear then this one,
Why can't I simply,
Be given a shot,
Why can't we just,
Drive and drive,
Let the wind play with,
Your hair,
Can't I just have one day,
Just one dance,
Why can't,
I just,
Ask you to Homecoming,
Can't you just accept my never given offer,
And go to Homecoming with me,
But you have probably,
Already got a date,
Why wouldn't you?
How couldn't you?
How many guys,
Would give up this chance,
To ask such a beautiful person,
To just one dance. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Asatru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Homecoming

Contributed by Asatru on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You once asked me for a tear,
A tear I have shed for no one to see,
My hidden tears are just for me,
But I will sacrifice,
One tear for you,
And just for you,
But yet I am so tired,
Because of all this raging in my head,
So tired,
Of never being,
Given just one chance,
With you at all,
You can't imagion,
How much I want you,
I'm sorry for telling you this,
So sorry,
Sorry,
But why can't I have,
Just one chance,
To let our friendship grow,
Just to look into the fallen angels eyes,
Only to let me peer through,
Look deeply into your soul,
It's such a beautiful essence,
And since,
You have accepted,
My glass heart,
Please don't make me,
Fill it with anymore tear then this one,
Why can't I simply,
Be given a shot,
Why can't we just,
Drive and drive,
Let the wind play with,
Your hair,
Can't I just have one day,
Just one dance,
Why can't,
I just,
Ask you to Homecoming,
Can't you just accept my never given offer,
And go to Homecoming with me,
But you have probably,
Already got a date,
Why wouldn't you?
How couldn't you?
How many guys,
Would give up this chance,
To ask such a beautiful person,
To just one dance.




Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2003-10-08 23:43:34]
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Re: Homecoming (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 02:07:01 AM AEST
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awww, how sweet, i hope you get to go with him:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Homecoming (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:27:12 PM AEST
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...I am a male...but she said no anyways, that's why I figured I'd post it now, for now it has no meaning in my heart...




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