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Array ( [sid] => 24615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To a Great Friend [time] => 2003-10-08 11:22:46 [hometext] => To one of my greatest friends, Amy, on account of the passing away of her mother. [bodytext] => The greatest pain
The deepest loss
Your heart has been stained
You now carry a cross

My own heart cries
I wish to be there
To hug, hold you tight
Your burdens and tears, to share

My words I know
Can't cure your pain
I just wish to show
My friendship's not in vain

Think of where
She must be now
No fear or care
Before God, she bows

All things that happen
Are all for the best
Amy, you'll see her again
In the Eternal Rest

Amy, I love you
As a brother should
If I could be there
You know I would [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

To a Great Friend

Contributed by wachumiri on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:22:46 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The greatest pain
The deepest loss
Your heart has been stained
You now carry a cross

My own heart cries
I wish to be there
To hug, hold you tight
Your burdens and tears, to share

My words I know
Can't cure your pain
I just wish to show
My friendship's not in vain

Think of where
She must be now
No fear or care
Before God, she bows

All things that happen
Are all for the best
Amy, you'll see her again
In the Eternal Rest

Amy, I love you
As a brother should
If I could be there
You know I would

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2003-10-08 11:22:46]
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Re: To a Great Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:25:52 AM AEST
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this is beautiful.... hope you've shown it to her... :)

Re: To a Great Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Philipa on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 01:42:24 PM AEST
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Most sad and well written. I agree with the above comment, show your friend Amy the poem.

Philipa

Re: To a Great Friend (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:35:37 PM AEST
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David That was great. Thank you for the poem out of your heart
Katrina

Re: To a Great Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by angel1 on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:19:53 PM AEST
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it was excellent and very emotional i loved it i wish i had a friend like you

Re: To a Great Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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David my friend, it is me I just wanted to tell you that this is the most emotionaly friend caring poem by you that I'v read. very well done.

and if you havent please do show her and let her know that we will all be praying for her.

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