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Deep
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:21:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears weren’t coming from my eyes, they were on the inside,
Oh I am in love with you, but my love I have to hide.
You say to me that you don’t love her, but it’s in the way you talk,
You say that you don’t love her, but you change your pace as you walk.
I know that I can get your attention, but it wanders when she comes along.
Oh everyone that I get close to, something has to go wrong.
Every person that I have grown to, leaves me and I have nothing,
I wish I could feel the joys of what an everlasting friendship should bring.
You can’t love me because I get depressed? But she has her problems too!
You know what? I don’t even know why I should be in love with you!
You’re just a good friend who shared a little of your heart,
But that little bit of your heart doesn’t belong to me, not one part.
I close my eyes to my own pain so that it doesn’t show.
I’m scared at what will happen to our friendship if I tell you, but you have a right to know.
Because even though you are the one that brings me happiness, you also bring me pain.
I can’t get over this by myself, I don’t want to leave you but I don’t know if I can remain.
This is going to destroy me, I need to tell you but I’m too scared.
Oh I wish, I wish you were someone in my life that cared.
I’m going to keep talking to you, keep my feelings quiet, so you will never know.
Then maybe one day I will have someone who makes me feel like you do and my love for you I will outgrow.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-10-07 00:21:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:28:10 AM AEST (User
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I REALLY DO LOVE THIS AND I CAN SAY THIS SOUNDS LIKE ME BUT I DON'T WANT THE FEELS TO LEAVE. I AM WORKING ON IT AND ALSO I AM WORKING ON ARE FRIENDSHIP. I FEEL HE NEEDS TO LET SOME OUT BUT HE HIDES THEM INSIDE I HATE IT BUT MAYBE HE CAN'T HELP IT |
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kalika on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 01:21:38 AM AEST (User
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I can feel the raw nerve endings on this one, Em. Beautiful dispite its sad subject.
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 03:02:58 AM AEST (User
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sad and beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 03:11:40 AM AEST (User
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So beautiful, yet so painful..... Your a marvelous poet. Great poem. |
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 07:15:27 AM AEST (User
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Em..this is so beautiful and yet another of your poems that I can relate to. I felt this poem deeply. It is such an emotionaly and honest write. Absolutely beautiful. And you know what? You will find that special person oneday, maybe not straight away, but you will find him :D
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 04:02:17 PM AEST (User
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You have expressed yourself beautifully here...can feel your pain. Hope things get better for you soon! Good write!
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Re: Deep
(User Rating: 1 ) by dena on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 08:45:23 PM AEST (User
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wonderful poem... i love jow you write! |
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