Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  01-November 09:53:03 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
 Reference
· Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Deep

Contributed by EmSal on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:21:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Tears weren’t coming from my eyes, they were on the inside,
Oh I am in love with you, but my love I have to hide.
You say to me that you don’t love her, but it’s in the way you talk,
You say that you don’t love her, but you change your pace as you walk.

I know that I can get your attention, but it wanders when she comes along.
Oh everyone that I get close to, something has to go wrong.
Every person that I have grown to, leaves me and I have nothing,
I wish I could feel the joys of what an everlasting friendship should bring.

You can’t love me because I get depressed? But she has her problems too!
You know what? I don’t even know why I should be in love with you!
You’re just a good friend who shared a little of your heart,
But that little bit of your heart doesn’t belong to me, not one part.

I close my eyes to my own pain so that it doesn’t show.
I’m scared at what will happen to our friendship if I tell you, but you have a right to know.
Because even though you are the one that brings me happiness, you also bring me pain.
I can’t get over this by myself, I don’t want to leave you but I don’t know if I can remain.

This is going to destroy me, I need to tell you but I’m too scared.
Oh I wish, I wish you were someone in my life that cared.
I’m going to keep talking to you, keep my feelings quiet, so you will never know.
Then maybe one day I will have someone who makes me feel like you do and my love for you I will outgrow.




Copyright © EmSal ... [ 2003-10-07 00:21:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:28:10 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I REALLY DO LOVE THIS AND I CAN SAY THIS SOUNDS LIKE ME BUT I DON'T WANT THE FEELS TO LEAVE. I AM WORKING ON IT AND ALSO I AM WORKING ON ARE FRIENDSHIP. I FEEL HE NEEDS TO LET SOME OUT BUT HE HIDES THEM INSIDE I HATE IT BUT MAYBE HE CAN'T HELP IT


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 01:21:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I can feel the raw nerve endings on this one, Em. Beautiful dispite its sad subject.

Kali


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 03:02:58 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
sad and beautiful.. venkat


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 03:11:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
So beautiful, yet so painful..... Your a marvelous poet. Great poem.


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 07:15:27 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Em..this is so beautiful and yet another of your poems that I can relate to. I felt this poem deeply. It is such an emotionaly and honest write. Absolutely beautiful. And you know what? You will find that special person oneday, maybe not straight away, but you will find him :D

Stacey


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 04:02:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
You have expressed yourself beautifully here...can feel your pain. Hope things get better for you soon! Good write!
Saira


Re: Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by dena on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 08:45:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wonderful poem... i love jow you write!




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com