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Array ( [sid] => 24523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dream [time] => 2003-10-06 17:34:25 [hometext] => Kinda wierd, but I hope you like it [bodytext] => Stumbling feet in the light of dusk
Cold, battered
Lacking trust.
Running into the frightening mists
Screaming, dreaming
Cutting thin wrists.
Feeling the blood dripping down like tears
Crying, dying
Heightening fears.
Sudden pressure clamping down on cold hands
Waking, breaking
Unable to discern,
"Be still my love, no one will hurt you;
Do not be afraid
I will not leave you".
Looking up into clear blue eyes
Seeking, delving
Yearining for lies.
Finally at peace after seeing not but truth
Smiling, accepting
Happy at last. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 13 [informant] => haunted_moonlight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Dream

Contributed by haunted_moonlight on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 05:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Stumbling feet in the light of dusk
Cold, battered
Lacking trust.
Running into the frightening mists
Screaming, dreaming
Cutting thin wrists.
Feeling the blood dripping down like tears
Crying, dying
Heightening fears.
Sudden pressure clamping down on cold hands
Waking, breaking
Unable to discern,
"Be still my love, no one will hurt you;
Do not be afraid
I will not leave you".
Looking up into clear blue eyes
Seeking, delving
Yearining for lies.
Finally at peace after seeing not but truth
Smiling, accepting
Happy at last.

Copyright © haunted_moonlight ... [ 2003-10-06 17:34:25]
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Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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Great poem, love the rhyme scheme ... Jan

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 09:45:11 PM AEST
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im really likin yo poem* i like how u rhyme and erythang* keep writin'* HOLLa fo a DOLLA*

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ichiban_girl on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:35:05 AM AEST
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Great write. Keep up the excellent work.
Jennifer Robin

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 09:41:09 PM AEST
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A very nice poem with a dark story and a unique ending I liked it, Keep it up.

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:38:34 PM AEST
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very nicely written! Good write

Zee

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