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[aid] => mick
[title] => It's about us
[time] => 2003-10-06 13:33:14
[hometext] => life n relationships are sometimes incomprehensible and this is about it....
[bodytext] => Let me speak my mind As this helps me unwind Though doing so is not so easy To unearth feelings & comprehend them makes me queasy. The whole thing is an arduous task When I stand bare without a mask. Did I do something wrong Was that wrong so wrong To make her feel contemptuous about me ,did I really suck her energy Then I realize with a twang. That when I wanted to take her for granted It was the freedom that she wanted Was it emancipation & a notion of nobility That she wanted to feel no responsibility. It’s the dawning of realization That it is the past’s cremation It’s the celebration of what life could be worth When she walked away , u came along Honey may I ask u , what took u so long Though we love each other that’s for sure Yet u married makes it sort of a lure What we feel is compassion ;compassion not for each other But for those who surround you When u want to fly , they ground you When I kiss u , u drown & I look at u mesmerized like a clown is this lure really impure? Luv keep loving me what’s the fuss This is a story and it is about us. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 21 [informant] => sanjivvij [notes] => Edited by Mod_1 on 06.10.06. [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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