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Tiny lanterns of stars are overcome.
Dimming their brightness has just begun.
Early Earth snug in her berth.
Blankets of shadows, covers of dearth.
Eastern wall, night light small.
Creatures snoozing one and all.
Alarm clocks still, not a peep!
Perfectly timed, no oversleep!
Early Earth begins her morn
Removing her night blankets she has worn.
Mr. Moon hovers, 'til his shift will end.
Welcomes Sun his warmest friend.

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 2003
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GOOD MORNING EARTH

Contributed by lovingcritters on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

My critters rise before the sun.
Tiny lanterns of stars are overcome.
Dimming their brightness has just begun.
Early Earth snug in her berth.
Blankets of shadows, covers of dearth.
Eastern wall, night light small.
Creatures snoozing one and all.
Alarm clocks still, not a peep!
Perfectly timed, no oversleep!
Early Earth begins her morn
Removing her night blankets she has worn.
Mr. Moon hovers, 'til his shift will end.
Welcomes Sun his warmest friend.

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 2003

Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2003-10-06 05:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 05:37:36 AM AEST
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lovely images..lovely write..these lines are very nice to remember.
"Early Earth begins her morn
Removing her night blankets she has worn
Mr. Moon hovers, 'til his shift will end.
Welcomes Sun his warmest friend."
thank you connie. venkat

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by Glo on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 05:56:02 AM AEST
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Morning Connie,

You are so blessed to wake up every morning, also to attend to such lovely animal people. Having the Moon at night and the Sun in the morning. Helping to guide you along. Very nice post Connie. Thanks for the early morning treat.:) Many blessings to you, and all the critters.

Glo!

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 05:57:58 AM AEST
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very lovely
Shari

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:26:40 AM AEST
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Here I sit in my late night
While you watch your early light
You gave my mind a beautiful sight
This your poem is pure delight!

I know you knew Id love this Connie..its gorgeous!
Sharon

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 09:03:15 AM AEST
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It is one beautiful poem
-------------------------------------
What you write cannot be seen
By the folks who live ungreen,
By which I mean us city dwellers,
jailed by noise, smoke and hellers.

Those who live where men are men
Awake at morn to see a hen,
The city folk awake at morn,
to symphony of blaring horn.

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 08:21:30 PM AEST
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i like this connie, very good write, crow

Re: GOOD MORNING EARTH (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 03:34:39 PM AEST
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oh connie this is great! i have the same alarm clock you do lol!! hugs n' love n' woofies, nessa

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