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I fall a captive to the spell ,
That demons cast on dying souls,
I crash against the rocky shoals,
Of sickness and profound dispair.

I gasp for breath and strike the air,

As terror wakes me from my sleep.
I pray to God my soul to keep.
But this the torment of my dreams,
The terror and the midnight screams,
Will end so soon in deaths embrace,
And all I was shall be erased ,
Within the reapers chilling grasp,
Eternally then will I clasp,
Two stiffend arms near lifeless chest
Entombed, forever then to rest,

My eyes see devils in the haze,
As I live out my final days. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ravenheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Final Days

Contributed by Ravenheart on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Into the bitter depths of hell,
I fall a captive to the spell ,
That demons cast on dying souls,
I crash against the rocky shoals,
Of sickness and profound dispair.

I gasp for breath and strike the air,

As terror wakes me from my sleep.
I pray to God my soul to keep.
But this the torment of my dreams,
The terror and the midnight screams,
Will end so soon in deaths embrace,
And all I was shall be erased ,
Within the reapers chilling grasp,
Eternally then will I clasp,
Two stiffend arms near lifeless chest
Entombed, forever then to rest,

My eyes see devils in the haze,
As I live out my final days.

Copyright © Ravenheart ... [ 2003-10-05 13:05:00]
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Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 01:12:00 PM AEST
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wow....A dark masterpiece if I do say so myself. I can only hope this is just a vision.

Very well done.

Larry

Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by jaavys on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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i gave you a five. this is an excellent poem. best of luck to you.

Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 02:29:59 PM AEST
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my my my.....i take you so seriously....dont talk like this..dont write like this.....seek god ..find peace.love and and his presence....you dont have to go to hell....your poem...my my my.....why do you write like this if you know in your heart that your not going to a place like this.....

Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 04:15:18 PM AEST
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Dark and beautiful write. I love it

Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 07:28:07 PM AEST
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Raven heart..you've done it again.Captured the darkness of many souls who do unfortunately feel this way..and to answer poetrygodslove..
why do you write this way??
Because you can!!!! You are a writer no matter what.Real or imaginery,you always portray the feelings so well..AWESOME!!

Re: My Final Days (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 10:49:32 AM AEST
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Wow, awsome write, very dark
great job -kelly

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