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Array ( [sid] => 24424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => i thought i knew you [time] => 2003-10-05 09:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cant believe you would make me try and see
A side of you I never thought there could be
Your cruels words cut through like ice
I always pictured you to be nice
But your just like the rest
You only try and act your best
And when your mood hits the air
I sometimes wish that I wernt there
I will hurt my family if I want to
But why is that something that you want to do
I dont like the way you were today
When your like that I want you away
Im not being nasty, cruel or bad
Im not trying to make you sad
But if you want to act so cold
And you dont want your family to hold
Then leave your family make a new start
Cut your family out of your heart
Theres kids involved, I dont want them to there
Showing through anger that you dont care
So please be straight and honest today
If you dont want your family then go away
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

i thought i knew you

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I cant believe you would make me try and see
A side of you I never thought there could be
Your cruels words cut through like ice
I always pictured you to be nice
But your just like the rest
You only try and act your best
And when your mood hits the air
I sometimes wish that I wernt there
I will hurt my family if I want to
But why is that something that you want to do
I dont like the way you were today
When your like that I want you away
Im not being nasty, cruel or bad
Im not trying to make you sad
But if you want to act so cold
And you dont want your family to hold
Then leave your family make a new start
Cut your family out of your heart
Theres kids involved, I dont want them to there
Showing through anger that you dont care
So please be straight and honest today
If you dont want your family then go away

Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2003-10-05 09:05:00]
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Re: i thought i knew you (User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:52:53 PM AEST
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Gosh, I keep reading your poems and Im loving them all... keep it up : )

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