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Array ( [sid] => 24383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Sacred Fruit [time] => 2003-10-04 17:05:00 [hometext] => Well... this is my newest poem, I haven't really been writing much lately... just had a lot on my mind... this says some stuff about what has happened between my gf and i... [bodytext] => The sacred fruit of your soul was lost
Taken unrightfully, stolen
It hurt immensely

You shared the holiness with others
To rid the raunch treachery

Then met a man who treated you horribly
Abused you, hit you, took control of you

I came and pleased you
Treated you well, made you happy
Shared our thoughts
Entered each others minds

We talked about memories
Things we had
Things we want
What we need

We laughed
Cried
Smiled

The love we had
The love we have
I want to be with you till the end
I want to give you my fruit
And share my wine

For you are my girl
My love
My heart
My soul
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The Sacred Fruit

Contributed by garyh on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The sacred fruit of your soul was lost
Taken unrightfully, stolen
It hurt immensely

You shared the holiness with others
To rid the raunch treachery

Then met a man who treated you horribly
Abused you, hit you, took control of you

I came and pleased you
Treated you well, made you happy
Shared our thoughts
Entered each others minds

We talked about memories
Things we had
Things we want
What we need

We laughed
Cried
Smiled

The love we had
The love we have
I want to be with you till the end
I want to give you my fruit
And share my wine

For you are my girl
My love
My heart
My soul

Copyright © garyh ... [ 2003-10-04 17:05:00]
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Re: The Sacred Fruit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:39:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem... You opened your heart and love for her to see..... Awesome poem!

Re: The Sacred Fruit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:42:00 PM AEST
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Awwww...She is one lucky gal to have found someone who allowed her in and respected her. Great write.Nicely done!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: The Sacred Fruit (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:02:06 AM AEST
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awww.... "I want to give you my fruit and share my wine"... that's beautiful... :)

Re: The Sacred Fruit (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:13:10 PM AEST
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Very nice poem shares a nice part of yourself.....keep up the great writing.

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