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Array ( [sid] => 24369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => How much??? [time] => 2003-10-04 10:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Just how much more can I take
Before my lonely heart will break
How much more can I stand
Before my life is in gods hand
How much more can I feel
Knowing my life isnt real
How much longer can I last
Living each day by the past
The answers none, I cant take this
So now this is my final wish
Leave me cold, let me die
My lonely heart will say goodbye
Live your life with me gone
For I know that ive done wrong
Live your life till you feel whole
Let me rest my hurting soul.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
How much???

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Just how much more can I take
Before my lonely heart will break
How much more can I stand
Before my life is in gods hand
How much more can I feel
Knowing my life isnt real
How much longer can I last
Living each day by the past
The answers none, I cant take this
So now this is my final wish
Leave me cold, let me die
My lonely heart will say goodbye
Live your life with me gone
For I know that ive done wrong
Live your life till you feel whole
Let me rest my hurting soul.




Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2003-10-04 10:05:00]
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Re: How much??? (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:47:24 AM AEST
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Goodbye. Have fun being dead and all. I give this a 3.9 on the Nortiscale.


Re: How much??? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:55:30 PM AEST
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Awww Angel this is so sad...an excellent write just hertbreaking for me to read. I know words may not mean much but stay strong. Take care.

Emma.




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