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Array ( [sid] => 24368 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Out my life forever [time] => 2003-10-04 10:05:00 [hometext] => For you (you know who you are) [bodytext] => How could something so beautiful turn so bad
How could someone i love make me mad
why do i lose all i gain
or seem to spend my life in pain
i wonder do you hate me or just pray
that my life is hell everyday
was i your experiment for you to see
just how much hurt you can throw at me
what is it with you, i dreamed you were great
but you have made my love turn into hate
I cant take no more what dont you get
out of my life its you i regret
to be honest in my eyes
all your love was only lies
i dont understand what dont you get
Im starting to wish we never met.
i cant help but feel a fool
sometimes your just cruel
If i had been givin a wish
i would take back our very first kiss
I wouldnt have given you my heart
for you to rip and tear apart
I cant do this i cant lie
im glad that you just walked by
Cause now we are not together
Im glad your out my life forever

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Out my life forever

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



How could something so beautiful turn so bad
How could someone i love make me mad
why do i lose all i gain
or seem to spend my life in pain
i wonder do you hate me or just pray
that my life is hell everyday
was i your experiment for you to see
just how much hurt you can throw at me
what is it with you, i dreamed you were great
but you have made my love turn into hate
I cant take no more what dont you get
out of my life its you i regret
to be honest in my eyes
all your love was only lies
i dont understand what dont you get
Im starting to wish we never met.
i cant help but feel a fool
sometimes your just cruel
If i had been givin a wish
i would take back our very first kiss
I wouldnt have given you my heart
for you to rip and tear apart
I cant do this i cant lie
im glad that you just walked by
Cause now we are not together
Im glad your out my life forever





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Re: Out my life forever (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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I liked this. Written good and plenty of heart. I give this a 4.5 on the Nortiscale.


Re: Out my life forever (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:54:32 AM AEST
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I'm glad too. If you hadn't kissed then you wouldn't have written this and then I couldn't have enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your pain. I give this a 4.5 on the Nortiscale.


Re: Out my life forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Candi on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:37:07 AM AEST
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i give this poem a 5. reading it brought tears to my eyes. it has so much feeling and emotion. it brought back so many memories. i know it hurts to go through this kind of situation, but just look at it as inspiration for you, your anger and pain caused you to write a beautiful poem. all things happen for a reason, and maybe thats why that happened, to inspire your true talent. i cant wait to find more of your poems to read.




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