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ok so im giving up
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i will now stop crying
give up trying
because as much as i do love you your not good for me
i dont want to sream
because i havnt lost anything......
i need
being to you was nothing just a dream of how i wanted it to be
so ive stopped trying
like you stop caring
i dont need the "love you"
ill stick to swearing
so please dont look back at me
i wont be their you wait and see
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2003-10-03 22:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ok so im giving up
(User Rating: 1 ) by GuyJular on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 11:29:16 PM AEST (User
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This feels more like a letter then a poem. Where's the rhyme scheme? But I know where ur coming from in it. I think u could write it better tho |
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