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Array ( [sid] => 24299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Young Woman [time] => 2003-10-03 08:35:00 [hometext] => time is a thief [bodytext] => Tiny tears,
a childs laughter.

Hold her so close
from cold and harm.

Stepping so boldly into the world,
knowing I am there.

Imagine feelings here within,
as she rights the world she builds.

My heart grows weak,
I might cry a bit.

Little girl of tears,
little girl of giggles.

I straighten myself,
as this young woman approaches.....Crow [comments] => 11 [counter] => 315 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Young Woman

Contributed by crow on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Tiny tears,
a childs laughter.

Hold her so close
from cold and harm.

Stepping so boldly into the world,
knowing I am there.

Imagine feelings here within,
as she rights the world she builds.

My heart grows weak,
I might cry a bit.

Little girl of tears,
little girl of giggles.

I straighten myself,
as this young woman approaches.....Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-10-03 08:35:00]
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Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:51:27 AM AEST
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She will always be your "little girl"
But like the crow,she too must spread her wings and follow her dreams...
This is just so beautifully written.

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:56:54 AM AEST
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beautiful write...they grow so fast
Shari

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:28:23 AM AEST
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That's the hardest part...watching them bloom into young ladies when it seemed only yesterday they were little babies.
::::::hands crow a tissue:::::::: 0:-)
Affectionate write! Love it!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:30:49 PM AEST
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beautiful.........makes me catch my breath 'cause it reminds me of my daughter who's just turned 17:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:19:03 PM AEST
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you have a gift to cherish for a lifetime...and beyond....

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:14:05 PM AEST
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Mmmm... awesome poem Crow! Such a beautiful portrait you have painted!

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:49:58 PM AEST
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Crow you have touched every harp string in my heart.....all I hear is your music.
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 06:34:37 PM AEST
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you have captrued it so well - how fast our babies grow up - beautiful write

merry

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:20:53 PM AEST
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I have lived this 3 times, I must live it again as the years pass. I tell you in truth, you have captured the moments perfectly.
Larry

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:55:11 PM AEST
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Crow, you did it again....wonderful!
Saira

Re: Young Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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Really sad, enough to break a frozen heart, this was very well done, Excellent writing crow, it made me stop and think for a change.
Lokk forward to more of your writes in the future.

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