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Array ( [sid] => 24286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Whisper Upon The Wind [time] => 2003-10-03 03:25:00 [hometext] => I figured this out while talking to wyrd_faerie, so Lucie, thank you. Everyone else, enjoy it or don't. I won't bother stressing over negative comments anymore. It's just not worth it. [bodytext] => I'll always be happy I had you
And I'm sure I'll always miss you
At least the you you used to be
I'll always look back on it and smile
'Cause you and me, we went the mile
That was the way it used to be

I'll never forget the memories
I loved the way you needed me
I'd do it all over again
I'll never wish it turned out different
Or that to me you were never sent
And I'm glad I let you in

It hurts right now but I'll be okay
I wouldn't have it any other way
I wouldn't change a thing
I'm gonna let you go
Even though I thought it would never end
I can't go on, I simply can't pretend
But I loved every moment
And I'll never look back

I'm glad I got to have you in my life
It's time to say goodbye tonight
It's been over for some time now
I guess he was right, it just can't last
The good times are all in the past
I understand it's right somehow

It's fate, I know, and I'll move on
It hurts in a way like it's already gone
Like a whisper upon the wind
It was special and it was great
Something I'll always appreciate
So I'l hold on to it within

I'll never forget it was you who got me through
You showed me so much I needed you to
I'm no less who I am
Just 'cause I'm without you
You made me special and I always will be
You were there when I needed you to be
It was worth every second
I have no regrets [comments] => 5 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 52 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
A Whisper Upon The Wind

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I'll always be happy I had you
And I'm sure I'll always miss you
At least the you you used to be
I'll always look back on it and smile
'Cause you and me, we went the mile
That was the way it used to be

I'll never forget the memories
I loved the way you needed me
I'd do it all over again
I'll never wish it turned out different
Or that to me you were never sent
And I'm glad I let you in

It hurts right now but I'll be okay
I wouldn't have it any other way
I wouldn't change a thing
I'm gonna let you go
Even though I thought it would never end
I can't go on, I simply can't pretend
But I loved every moment
And I'll never look back

I'm glad I got to have you in my life
It's time to say goodbye tonight
It's been over for some time now
I guess he was right, it just can't last
The good times are all in the past
I understand it's right somehow

It's fate, I know, and I'll move on
It hurts in a way like it's already gone
Like a whisper upon the wind
It was special and it was great
Something I'll always appreciate
So I'l hold on to it within

I'll never forget it was you who got me through
You showed me so much I needed you to
I'm no less who I am
Just 'cause I'm without you
You made me special and I always will be
You were there when I needed you to be
It was worth every second
I have no regrets




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-10-03 03:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:50:05 AM AEST
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Such a positive write..Nice one.


Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:50:05 AM AEST
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such a powerful baring of yourself, I enjoyed it very much

Kali


Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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With such lovely words you write,how do you ever get *negative* comments. Your talent is quite evident and it shines in all the poetry you write. Keep up the good work!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:12:14 PM AEST
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you sound very strong here, yes, always be grateful for knowing someone and being so close...... excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa xx


Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:28:57 PM AEST
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you spoke the words i need to say to a friend......wow....great write!!!!




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