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Array ( [sid] => 24282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unlocking my conscious [time] => 2003-10-03 02:05:00 [hometext] => wrote this when feeling confused to say the least! [bodytext] => Opening up to you, erupting my emotions into a volcanic display.
Melting down my pedastal for uncertain figures,
freedom can now flow throughout my heart.
I can finally tell you my true aspirations, my desires.
The truthful loving you have given me,
the mature nature of your kindness is so sweet.
My erratic display of solitude towards the portrait of our relationship can now be forgotten of.
You are my best friend, my soulmate, together we are made for one another.
I want a chance to show you that my dear, however now may not be o.k.?
There is this barrier,
a very unclimable mountain, peeking in at our love.
I do not know how to go over this mountain, to display my true love for you, which is oh so genuine.
I really DO love you.
I can open up, laugh, cry, you allow ME to be ME.
Foolish looks and estranged thoughts do not worry you, for you are truly as lovely as I have always pictured!
Won't you give me a chance?
How do I test this love without our friendship ceasing?
Give me a signal, something, so I can jump at the opportunity,
and see what we have been missing. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 22 [informant] => apollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Unlocking my conscious

Contributed by apollo on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Opening up to you, erupting my emotions into a volcanic display.
Melting down my pedastal for uncertain figures,
freedom can now flow throughout my heart.
I can finally tell you my true aspirations, my desires.
The truthful loving you have given me,
the mature nature of your kindness is so sweet.
My erratic display of solitude towards the portrait of our relationship can now be forgotten of.
You are my best friend, my soulmate, together we are made for one another.
I want a chance to show you that my dear, however now may not be o.k.?
There is this barrier,
a very unclimable mountain, peeking in at our love.
I do not know how to go over this mountain, to display my true love for you, which is oh so genuine.
I really DO love you.
I can open up, laugh, cry, you allow ME to be ME.
Foolish looks and estranged thoughts do not worry you, for you are truly as lovely as I have always pictured!
Won't you give me a chance?
How do I test this love without our friendship ceasing?
Give me a signal, something, so I can jump at the opportunity,
and see what we have been missing.

Copyright © apollo ... [ 2003-10-03 02:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unlocking my conscious (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 10:45:35 AM AEST
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Isn't it amazing when you find someone to whom you can show your TRUE self to, and they understand you? (It's also kind of scary)
Great write.
~T

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