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Array ( [sid] => 24260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ETERNITY [time] => 2003-10-02 17:45:00 [hometext] => Plz comment, it means alot 2 me [bodytext] => Every day I’m living
In a smiling false disguise
But you know I’m different
You see it in my eyes
And from the look upon your face
I see you’re not impressed;
I’m a great little actor
Until I get undressed
Cause then you’ll see the scars
I try to keep unseen
The scars upon my body
That remind me where I’ve been
Another secret
I keep out of sight
Is I cut myself
Nearly every night
I may not be sweet
I may not be kind
And I may be slightly
Unstable of mind
But you say I’m selfish
And I have to ask, why?
You must be selfish
If you won’t let me die
Do you feel guilty?
Do you feel bad?
Do you really want to know
Why I was sad?
I bet you don’t
But if you feel like me
Come join me and we’ll rest for
E
T
E
R
N
I
T
Y
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Bohemian_with_a_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

ETERNITY

Contributed by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Every day I’m living
In a smiling false disguise
But you know I’m different
You see it in my eyes
And from the look upon your face
I see you’re not impressed;
I’m a great little actor
Until I get undressed
Cause then you’ll see the scars
I try to keep unseen
The scars upon my body
That remind me where I’ve been
Another secret
I keep out of sight
Is I cut myself
Nearly every night
I may not be sweet
I may not be kind
And I may be slightly
Unstable of mind
But you say I’m selfish
And I have to ask, why?
You must be selfish
If you won’t let me die
Do you feel guilty?
Do you feel bad?
Do you really want to know
Why I was sad?
I bet you don’t
But if you feel like me
Come join me and we’ll rest for
E
T
E
R
N
I
T
Y

Copyright Â© Bohemian_with_a_pen ... [ 2003-10-02 17:45:00]
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Re: ETERNITY (User Rating: 1 )
by SinfullyTwisted on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:10:35 PM AEST
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Sent shivers up my spine. Great write. It really spoke to me.

Re: ETERNITY (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:18:20 PM AEST
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wow this is intense
michelle

Re: ETERNITY (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:21:52 PM AEST
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emotive this is.......great job.....

Re: ETERNITY (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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Sounds so familiar to me. I love how you wrote this out, especially the ending. Beautifully done, Great poem

*_-Psych-_*

Re: ETERNITY (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 02:28:49 PM AEST
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This really was a great poem...you explained yourself very well! Great job!
~*~Nessa~*~ (adidaschic04@sbcglobal.net)

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