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Array ( [sid] => 24212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Time Stands Still [time] => 2003-10-01 22:45:00 [hometext] => ......january 1991.... [bodytext] => The wind has
changed from
warm to cold.
The valentines are
laid out on
the shelves
waiting for
cupid's arrow.
The lighted
sphere
made its' way
to the bottom
in
Time's Square.
The old has
changed over
to new.
The sod on
the ground
is mending
slowly,
but
you can still
tell.
The house so
empty without
a little girl's
chatter.
The room
so cold to
walk through.
The baby doll's
smile seems
less cheerful.
The heart
so full of
deep
sadness.
The little
angel
never
turns
four. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 350 [topic] => 39 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Time Stands Still

Contributed by jaeann on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The wind has
changed from
warm to cold.
The valentines are
laid out on
the shelves
waiting for
cupid's arrow.
The lighted
sphere
made its' way
to the bottom
in
Time's Square.
The old has
changed over
to new.
The sod on
the ground
is mending
slowly,
but
you can still
tell.
The house so
empty without
a little girl's
chatter.
The room
so cold to
walk through.
The baby doll's
smile seems
less cheerful.
The heart
so full of
deep
sadness.
The little
angel
never
turns
four.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-10-01 22:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:01:59 PM AEST
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My dear friend Jaymee,
Let no man tell you that you will forget!
You won't, ever forget, but with time you learn to cope, you learn each day with alittle more hope!
That perhaps the day after will be a bit better.
Then you hear a tune, or run onto a letter,
The memories come flooding in, one right after the other!
You start with if, and then whys, and pretty soon even lies....but it doesn't change a thing. You write poetry, you'll always idolize her things, dolls, smiles, even cries.
Your heart sighs, and even dies....and then you just one day wake up and realize....you have to accept......that's the worse part.....you just have accept!
Warm hugs and mugs of hot cider, I love you!lovingcritters....your poem was heartwrenching, touches every harp string of my heart! Death is an enemy, Jaymee....it goes against the grain....no one should have to die, and yet we do! Over and over again. if only we could bring them back?We can't so we just sigh and accept!

Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:50:12 AM AEST
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All I can say hun is..listen to Connie..she speaks from the heart and soul..her wisdom and tenderness,will see you through..I wish there was something I can say..but I know too well..that words fail the healing.

Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:12:44 PM AEST
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you just tear my heart away, bring tears to my eyes. a thousand words could not increase the impact. so sorry for the loss. sincerely Crow

Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 04:12:32 PM AEST
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I definitely read your poems in the wrong order this morning :((( I wondered how old your little girl was when she died ... and now I do ... my heart goes out to you so much ... you have written a breathtaking piece of emotion here ... Jan

Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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I got shivers when I read this. Very, very good write.

Re: Time Stands Still (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:42:01 AM AEST
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My heart goes out to you as I sit here and read this. I don't think there is any amount of words that could ever and should ever take away the pain you feel inside,but knowing you have friends that care,can ease some of what you feel. {{{{{{jaymee}}}}}}}
Angel always...godspeed...joni

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