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Someone may even feel guilt, for lies friendship was built.
If only I could accomplish this, I would die knowing someone cared to cry.
Finally the memories and hurt would be put to rest.
No more worthless breaths for my chest.
Maybe I would live on in someone’s mind,
Only now when it doesn’t matter, when it is me you can’t find.
You know it is way too late
To fix anything for yourself when you are just left with hate.
I don’t know who I am anymore,
All I know is I feel this pain and hate,
I choke, give me more, I’m insane.
Give myself up to this constant blame.
When I’m dead, oh it won’t be a shame.
It won’t be a shame to any one of you at all.
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What A Shame

Contributed by EmSal on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Maybe if I die, someone might wonder, someone might cry.
Someone may even feel guilt, for lies friendship was built.
If only I could accomplish this, I would die knowing someone cared to cry.
Finally the memories and hurt would be put to rest.
No more worthless breaths for my chest.
Maybe I would live on in someone’s mind,
Only now when it doesn’t matter, when it is me you can’t find.
You know it is way too late
To fix anything for yourself when you are just left with hate.
I don’t know who I am anymore,
All I know is I feel this pain and hate,
I choke, give me more, I’m insane.
Give myself up to this constant blame.
When I’m dead, oh it won’t be a shame.
It won’t be a shame to any one of you at all.

Copyright Â© EmSal ... [ 2003-10-01 17:45:00]
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Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:33:47 PM AEST
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Well, ya see, if you want someone to care or ,as it seems, feel bad, then probably the best thing to be is homicidal instead of suicidal. That way you still get what you wanted, plus you get to live. If that's any small token... Anyway, great write.

Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:42:38 PM AEST
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tho a bit twisted I think sock is right at least then ull be alive to enjoy the ruin u create. For what its worth I think It would be a shame, really I do. and I can think of at least one other person in ur life who agrees. Anyway I certianly hope u feel better now than when you wrote this.

Lotsa luv
Kali

Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:43:47 PM AEST
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hehehe I meant sick not sock, and tho its sad its a nice write.

Kali

Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Becky on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:44:38 PM AEST
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Very deep!!

Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:28:04 AM AEST
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so sad, good expression. hope thing get better, Crow

Re: What A Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:36:20 AM AEST
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LIFE IS HARD. WE ALL NEED GET THOUGHT IT. I FEEL IT'S BETTER TO FACE YOUR PROBLEM THAN TO WALK AWAY.
I'LL SAY THAT I THOUGHT ABOUT IT. I WAS IN A BAD RELATIONSHIP AND I NEED KNOW HOW TO GET AWAY. PEOPLE ARE OUT THERE AND THEY WANT TO HELP. I SAID WELL I CAN LEAVE THIS RELATIONSHIP BY ENDING MY LIFE BUT IT WASN'T CAUSE IN THE MEAN TIME YOU'RE HURTING OTHER PEOPLE THAT NEED YOU AND YOURSELF

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