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Array ( [sid] => 24111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Without Hope [time] => 2003-09-30 03:45:00 [hometext] => This is an older problem. One of my favourites. I wrote it back in my darker, more bitter days. Enjoy. [bodytext] => Blank eyes, and frozen touch
How can I envy them so much?
Blind tears, and falling rain
The sweet, aching, endless pain
The fire I cannot outshine
The bleeding I will never staunch
The open part of me I hide

Cold heart, and whispered dreams
Grabbing hold of tearing seams
Broken promises, tainted kiss
The beginning of the end like this
The shadow standing in the dark
The noose tightening ‘round my neck
The voices tearing me apart
The part of me I can’t forget

Bound forever, spirit and soul
Until we wither, and grow old
Until we are dead and born again
Now and forever, bound to pretend
Bound to hide in secrecy
Bound to veil this part of me
Bound to swallow down this hate
To give up a gift I cannot take
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Without Hope

Contributed by SinfullyTwisted on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Blank eyes, and frozen touch
How can I envy them so much?
Blind tears, and falling rain
The sweet, aching, endless pain
The fire I cannot outshine
The bleeding I will never staunch
The open part of me I hide

Cold heart, and whispered dreams
Grabbing hold of tearing seams
Broken promises, tainted kiss
The beginning of the end like this
The shadow standing in the dark
The noose tightening ‘round my neck
The voices tearing me apart
The part of me I can’t forget

Bound forever, spirit and soul
Until we wither, and grow old
Until we are dead and born again
Now and forever, bound to pretend
Bound to hide in secrecy
Bound to veil this part of me
Bound to swallow down this hate
To give up a gift I cannot take

Copyright Â© SinfullyTwisted ... [ 2003-09-30 03:45:00]
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Re: Without Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by hazelnut on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 05:09:30 AM AEST
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whispers in the dark...beautiful

Re: Without Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 01:10:24 PM AEST
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Great write! I really like this...striking imagery touched my heart, but never get disappointed, my friend. Soon there will be fireflies illuminating your way...stay well!
Saira

Re: Without Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:14:47 PM AEST
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wow I absolutely loved this it spoke to me deeply so poetic and beautiful and sad.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Without Hope (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:01:56 PM AEST
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nice .. i felt what u feel for thus is a dark week for me

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