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Array ( [sid] => 24076 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Nothing But a Blank [time] => 2003-09-29 14:05:00 [hometext] => Feeling kinda dark right now [bodytext] => Just like a camera's shutter refusing to open,
My mind no longer seems to be coping.
No emotions, no thoughts, nothing is there,
My eyes don't even focus, just only stare.
Just like a piece of paper, blank, no drawing,
Or a sliver of ice waiting for thawing.
There is nothing, not even black or white,
no noise, no smell or a flicker of light.
Nothing, nothing, not a thing is there,
No feeling, No life sustaining air.
Just death..........
Everythings gone blank. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kimmie_mac [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Nothing But a Blank

Contributed by Kimmie_mac on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Just like a camera's shutter refusing to open,
My mind no longer seems to be coping.
No emotions, no thoughts, nothing is there,
My eyes don't even focus, just only stare.
Just like a piece of paper, blank, no drawing,
Or a sliver of ice waiting for thawing.
There is nothing, not even black or white,
no noise, no smell or a flicker of light.
Nothing, nothing, not a thing is there,
No feeling, No life sustaining air.
Just death..........
Everythings gone blank.

Copyright © Kimmie_mac ... [ 2003-09-29 14:05:00]
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Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:18:43 PM AEST
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Wow Kimmie_mac, this is awesome...can fully understand what you are feeling right now...but soon dear, there will be a light in the dark for you...stay well!
Saira

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by poison_touch666 on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:29:26 PM AEST
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I know what you mean i think i wrote a poem somewhere about everything loosing it's feel, i really like your use of metaphors, really good poem.

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 05:00:19 PM AEST
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I have a weakness for the dark poem...and I like this one. Maybe it's because I can relate it to so many times in my life. Well done.

Larry

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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what a great job, very good poem Crow

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 06:54:06 AM AEST
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Dark side is there..some times we feel that blankness..this is a great work. really a great poem. venkat

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 02:35:10 PM AEST
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I understand this.. i've been there.. am still there i think..
x_x_x

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 09:26:11 AM AEST
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If you feel like this poem
you have trouble, indeed,
Your end is the end
It's not hard to heed,

But I'd much rather see
Some hope that could be,
There really must be
possibility.

Re: Nothing But a Blank (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 08:00:57 PM AEST
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Hi kimmie_mac,
very good poem but there is life after death.
no need to feel blink just believe.

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