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Array ( [sid] => 24003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => He Dances Alone [time] => 2003-09-28 14:35:00 [hometext] => Sometimes friends want to work out their problems all alone... [bodytext] => My thoughts of you nudge me for a reason
They keep telling me something is very wrong
And as I sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime is silent,without song

Night time unveils misguided emotion
Scarred is the heart,yet reaches out
To you my friend,across the ocean
Lost in hallways of self doubt

It hurts that time passes silently
I wonder of ways I may be a friend
When I hear not a word,day and nightly
Yet feel your sorrow when penned

Brother of far,friend in the sky
Know that my senses are strong
I feel you in chants,I see you in pain
Don't tell me there is nothing wrong

Unexpected arrivals of lifes little visits
Can sometimes be eased with a word
I told you I care,I want to be there
But I guess you just never heard....

So until your dance of sorrow
Has finished,and then moved along
I'll sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime silent,without song [comments] => 11 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 16 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

He Dances Alone

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

My thoughts of you nudge me for a reason
They keep telling me something is very wrong
And as I sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime is silent,without song

Night time unveils misguided emotion
Scarred is the heart,yet reaches out
To you my friend,across the ocean
Lost in hallways of self doubt

It hurts that time passes silently
I wonder of ways I may be a friend
When I hear not a word,day and nightly
Yet feel your sorrow when penned

Brother of far,friend in the sky
Know that my senses are strong
I feel you in chants,I see you in pain
Don't tell me there is nothing wrong

Unexpected arrivals of lifes little visits
Can sometimes be eased with a word
I told you I care,I want to be there
But I guess you just never heard....

So until your dance of sorrow
Has finished,and then moved along
I'll sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime silent,without song

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-09-28 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:04:36 PM AEST
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I agree with you
A very lovely write
Shari

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:19:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful, Sharon. At least he won't be stepping on your toes, lol. Hope everything goes out well =)

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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Lovely, but oh so sad....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 06:34:55 PM AEST
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Beautifully written ... sad, but eloquent ... Jan

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:32:19 PM AEST
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Lovely....you're a good friend to have when one is in trouble. I hope the best for him :o)

Larry

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:26:52 PM AEST
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Oh Sharon how touching, and yet inviting....never let it be said that you didn't reach out!
You did more than shout! It's only you that can change you,
How lovely, loyal, kind, fellow feeling with beautiful rhyme.,
Lovingcritterrs
ConSue

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Walt on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:32:08 PM AEST
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In words we live to dance again. In sorrow we find the hope to pass from this day to the next. In the sunshine there is warmth. Good freinds remind each other that there is always hope and love. Great write and well crafted poem. Walt

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 10:36:47 PM AEST
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dearest sharon, awww this is so sweetly and caringly written, i love this poem:) hugs n' love nessa xx

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 11:10:09 PM AEST
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This is absoultely beautiful, I loved it. Amazing

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:12:58 AM AEST
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If only I had a friend like you...I would surely listen!!! I have had experiences of what you are writing about...and it felt like I was being pushed away, they needed to deal with it their own way, but in the end they totally left me...and that I have pushed people away not meaning to...but I am sure this will not happen to you, well I hope it doesn't. Excellent poem. Take Care.
Love Emma.

Re: He Dances Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 04:48:23 AM AEST
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Aww,it is a sad and beautiful write.,very caring you're.
venkat

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