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Array ( [sid] => 23994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => First true Love [time] => 2003-09-28 10:05:00 [hometext] => hes a poem i wroye for my first true love a couple months after we broke up [bodytext] => You were my first real love,
And my first kiss,
When we broke up my tears could probably fill a tub,
Because I knew you I wuld 4ever miss.

I really loved you,
And deep down still do,
But I cant let those feelings show,
To anyone but you.

I hope that one day,
You’ll give me another chance,
Because I still think youre a great b/f,
And I really miss your kiss.

Im still glad that we are friends,
But sometimes I wish 2 be more,
But at this moment in time,
All i can do is wish to the stars very core.

You were my first true love,
And always will be,
And even though we broke up,
In my heart you will 4ever be with me.
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First true Love

Contributed by deathwriter on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You were my first real love,
And my first kiss,
When we broke up my tears could probably fill a tub,
Because I knew you I wuld 4ever miss.

I really loved you,
And deep down still do,
But I cant let those feelings show,
To anyone but you.

I hope that one day,
You’ll give me another chance,
Because I still think youre a great b/f,
And I really miss your kiss.

Im still glad that we are friends,
But sometimes I wish 2 be more,
But at this moment in time,
All i can do is wish to the stars very core.

You were my first true love,
And always will be,
And even though we broke up,
In my heart you will 4ever be with me.

Copyright Â© deathwriter ... [ 2003-09-28 10:05:00]
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Re: First true Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:40:04 PM AEST
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Yup I know this all to well, and it's so hard to still be their friend when all you wanna do is go up to them and kiss them! Then you have the memories...its horrible, but better to be friends than nothing at all...

please comment on my work too
summer

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