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Array ( [sid] => 23986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Other Side [time] => 2003-09-28 06:05:00 [hometext] => a young girl asks questions [bodytext] => I sit and wonder often,
what some of us have done.

To have to walk an early path,
so young and all alone.

To have to make the choices,
arrange a mind to fit.

Who loves me here,
who loves me not,
is it different on the other side?

Who stands with me,
who walks away,
willI I be loved?
or stand alone again.

To walk away,
a child of dust.
Is it different on the other side..........Crow [comments] => 6 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Other Side

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I sit and wonder often,
what some of us have done.

To have to walk an early path,
so young and all alone.

To have to make the choices,
arrange a mind to fit.

Who loves me here,
who loves me not,
is it different on the other side?

Who stands with me,
who walks away,
willI I be loved?
or stand alone again.

To walk away,
a child of dust.
Is it different on the other side..........Crow

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Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:59:51 AM AEST
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we have probably all wondered now and then
good write
Shari

Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 08:45:45 AM AEST
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So sad that youth has these questions...I know you passed her some comfort :)
Always deep and thought provoking..

Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:06:44 PM AEST
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very touchy ang great write!
Saira

Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:51:21 PM AEST
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i too, have had these questions....

Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:34:17 PM AEST
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Crow I understood this one....I'm getting better with each of your wonderful writes...I was so busy surviving when young, I never even thought to question....I just accepted my lot and would go on.
Young people now days have so many different media.....TV, on line....and everyone is asking the same questions...but few have the answers for young people to day.
I can tell you though...on the other side you find just exactly what you find on your side....
it's all the same tide.
Wonderful questioning, reasoning, write.
Really made me think
lovingcritters
Con sue

Re: The Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:42:49 AM AEST
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The grass is never greener on the other side.
I'll tell you a secret, true love never really feels like love at all. If you go out of way to do something for somebody, that is ten times better than telling them you love them. Trust the people who take care of you and you will rarely feel alone and if no takes care of you, teach some one how by taking care of them. The answers to lifes questions always involve doing something. Trust me: it is always hard.

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