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Array ( [sid] => 23971 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => With You Last Night [time] => 2003-09-27 22:35:00 [hometext] => Sending my love from the west coast to the east. [bodytext] => ~*~

I danced upon the lake with you last night.
Underneath the dark sky,
Taking my breath away with every sigh,
As you folded your arms around me tight.

My heart began to beat beside yours gently.
Lost in your sweet embrace,
Loving your touch with every grace,
As my lips brushed against yours intently.

I walked toward the heavens with you last night.
The clouds opening up wide,
Shooting stars grazing past our side,
As we gazed into each other’s sight.

Our lips locked as we were high above the land.
The heat of passion in a moment’s bliss,
Melting inside your tender kiss,
As our feet touched the gentle sand.

I awoke to my mountains late last night.
Confused in my bed,
So sure of the visions in my head,
You’re still at your ocean in the dawn of light.

Your love took me to a place I’ve never been.
Craving for your very touch,
…And missing you so very much…
As I’m wondering when we’ll be together again.

~*~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Rage [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

With You Last Night

Contributed by Rage on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

~*~

I danced upon the lake with you last night.
Underneath the dark sky,
Taking my breath away with every sigh,
As you folded your arms around me tight.

My heart began to beat beside yours gently.
Lost in your sweet embrace,
Loving your touch with every grace,
As my lips brushed against yours intently.

I walked toward the heavens with you last night.
The clouds opening up wide,
Shooting stars grazing past our side,
As we gazed into each other’s sight.

Our lips locked as we were high above the land.
The heat of passion in a moment’s bliss,
Melting inside your tender kiss,
As our feet touched the gentle sand.

I awoke to my mountains late last night.
Confused in my bed,
So sure of the visions in my head,
You’re still at your ocean in the dawn of light.

Your love took me to a place I’ve never been.
Craving for your very touch,
…And missing you so very much…
As I’m wondering when we’ll be together again.

~*~

Copyright Â© Rage ... [ 2003-09-27 22:35:00]
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Re: With You Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Dragons_Of_Rose on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 05:13:28 PM AEST
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Very caring. Well done.

Re: With You Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 10:37:41 AM AEST
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All of us would like to be
able to go and able to see
your feats of sweet accomplishment
Seems to me it's heaven sent...

Re: With You Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 02:25:33 PM AEST
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ahhh beautiful.......... hugs n' love nessa

Re: With You Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:39:12 AM AEST
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Breathtakingly beautiful.

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