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Array ( [sid] => 23911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Do You Remember? [time] => 2003-09-26 23:25:00 [hometext] => This poem is about a friend or family member or some body who lleft you when you needed them the most. For me it is pretty much my real father, but I kept it kinda vague, so it relates to anyone who has hurt me. [bodytext] => I remember
scratching to the bottom of the hole
feeling so low
heartaching so cold
you made me feel like I had no soul

I remember
you were never here
never saved me from my fears
never even noticed my icy tears
am I the reason you were never near?

I remember
all the hurting and the pain
feeling so ashamed
with only you to blame
it's always gonna be the same

I remember
here without you in my life
you have never been by my side
so alone I'll stride
while inside I'll always cry

I remember
the bitter cold flowing through my veins
while all hope seemed far away
a thousand tears streamed down my face
as I felt my eternal pain

I remember
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Do You Remember?

Contributed by jacquelynne on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I remember
scratching to the bottom of the hole
feeling so low
heartaching so cold
you made me feel like I had no soul

I remember
you were never here
never saved me from my fears
never even noticed my icy tears
am I the reason you were never near?

I remember
all the hurting and the pain
feeling so ashamed
with only you to blame
it's always gonna be the same

I remember
here without you in my life
you have never been by my side
so alone I'll stride
while inside I'll always cry

I remember
the bitter cold flowing through my veins
while all hope seemed far away
a thousand tears streamed down my face
as I felt my eternal pain

I remember
Do you?

Copyright © jacquelynne ... [ 2003-09-26 23:25:00]
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Re: Do You Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:55:04 PM AEST
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I feel your pain...you expressed my pain through your words here. It makes me sad that many feel this way. I'm so sorry for this. Nice poem. Take care.
Emma.

Re: Do You Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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Don't cry dear girl..please cheer up..It is beautifully written. venkat

Re: Do You Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:46:32 PM AEST
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Wow. That was beautiful. Very well done.

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