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from deep inside of me
self-destructive bent
intense self loathing
what comes around
instead of going
half a crust of bread
no interest on account
small child that was
left in the dark to cry
never enough love
to go around
in circles of suicide
drinking to wash down
the pretty pills
sliding down the wall
just the way I like to die
deliver me from evil
I swear I won’t tell
this could be the last time
I know that song by heart
hangman is my best friend
walks me to the end of my rope
teeter on the edge of the chair
singing nursery rhymes
I’ve forgotten the words now
whiskey running down my chin
here I go to hell again
cheers!

not so ~merry~

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Merry [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

teetering on the edge

Contributed by Merry on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:32:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

what is my punishment
from deep inside of me
self-destructive bent
intense self loathing
what comes around
instead of going
half a crust of bread
no interest on account
small child that was
left in the dark to cry
never enough love
to go around
in circles of suicide
drinking to wash down
the pretty pills
sliding down the wall
just the way I like to die
deliver me from evil
I swear I won’t tell
this could be the last time
I know that song by heart
hangman is my best friend
walks me to the end of my rope
teeter on the edge of the chair
singing nursery rhymes
I’ve forgotten the words now
whiskey running down my chin
here I go to hell again
cheers!

not so ~merry~

Copyright Â© Merry ... [ 2003-09-26 07:32:38]
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Re: teetering on the edge (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 01:48:05 AM AEST
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awww, huggers merry, my day was hard too, but i dont drink so im 'cheers' w/ you w/ my tea:P tomorrow will be a new brighter day, you'll see, and im here to talk if you ever want or need to, hugs n' love nessa x
~:*smiles n' sunshine*:~

Re: teetering on the edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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You left a comment to me saying if you knew me you would give me a hug...well....(((((((((((((((((((((((merry))))))))))))))))))))))))
Seems like you need a hug even if from a stranger :o) A simply perfect dark poem my dear. Well done! Larry

Re: teetering on the edge (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:38:17 AM AEST
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I am sorry merry, I missed this one..oh! dear friend..this is very sad and greatly moves my heart . I request you to get out of such deppressions. if you feel I am a good friend lay your head on my shoulder and feel my peace and joy. venkat

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