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Array ( [sid] => 23816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Breaking Me [time] => 2003-09-25 18:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's not your fault
It's mine
Bite your tongue til it bleeds
To keep yourself from saying that line
Too late its escaped and you let me crash
Crash and burn, why can't I learn?
Am I too blind to see?
That I can't be loved because I hate myself
And it shows upon my wrists
And from the drops of blood exiting from fingertips
As I take your breakup out on me
Can't you see? That you're breaking me, you know you're breaking me.
I can perceive that you deceive but regardless of your lies and of my cries
You're breaking me.
You just let go and I told you you'll never know, you'll never know
What it meant, to me to lie in your arms just lie there helplessly
I lied...while you lied...you told me you tried
But in the end loving me was too tough
I'm not your type, not good enough
Cause a guy like you deserves a girl on who he can rely
Not to spend every night at home and cry
Can't you see? That you're breaking me, you know you're breaking me.
I can perceive that you deceive but regardless of your lies and of my cries
You're breaking me.
So I hope you're satisfied with this suicide
That's what you wanted right? Me alone to die?
Me to write you one last song as I cry
to the God above
in which you don't believe
God, I'll die for love
Even though all he did was deceive
And broke me, he knows he's still breaking me, still breaking me
Regardless of my tries and of his lies
He's broken me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Breaking Me

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It's not your fault
It's mine
Bite your tongue til it bleeds
To keep yourself from saying that line
Too late its escaped and you let me crash
Crash and burn, why can't I learn?
Am I too blind to see?
That I can't be loved because I hate myself
And it shows upon my wrists
And from the drops of blood exiting from fingertips
As I take your breakup out on me
Can't you see? That you're breaking me, you know you're breaking me.
I can perceive that you deceive but regardless of your lies and of my cries
You're breaking me.
You just let go and I told you you'll never know, you'll never know
What it meant, to me to lie in your arms just lie there helplessly
I lied...while you lied...you told me you tried
But in the end loving me was too tough
I'm not your type, not good enough
Cause a guy like you deserves a girl on who he can rely
Not to spend every night at home and cry
Can't you see? That you're breaking me, you know you're breaking me.
I can perceive that you deceive but regardless of your lies and of my cries
You're breaking me.
So I hope you're satisfied with this suicide
That's what you wanted right? Me alone to die?
Me to write you one last song as I cry
to the God above
in which you don't believe
God, I'll die for love
Even though all he did was deceive
And broke me, he knows he's still breaking me, still breaking me
Regardless of my tries and of his lies
He's broken me.




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-09-25 18:45:00]
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Re: Breaking Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 07:56:16 PM AEST
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Wow, very heartfelt of you. Screw that guy if he's gonna break you. Find someone who'll spoil ya, I say. Great poem.


Re: Breaking Me (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:35:23 PM AEST
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"That I can't be loved because I hate myself" - I often wonder this. This poem is just astonishing, so sad, that even I can feel your pain, and it makes me angry...but this is good because it touched me. Your pain is so loud and clear. Please stay strong, show him he was wrong. Take care always.
Love Emma.


Re: Breaking Me (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 12:56:29 AM AEST
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i can so relatle to this poem cept that im still with someone who breaks me
I can't be loved because I hate myself
And it shows upon my wrists
so true so so true




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