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Array ( [sid] => 23804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-09-25 14:45:00 [hometext] => Just about to fall asleep the other night and these words just came to me..and I figured...why waste good words? So I wrote them down before I forgot...Thanks! [bodytext] => My Angel,
The apple of my eye,
Your passing has devastated me,
I wish you wouldn't have died.
You have left me here,
Lost and forlorn,
Nothing left with but a heart that's
broken, tattered and torn.
I hope you are happy,
In the place you are now,
That you have been saved,
And you're wings you have found.
It's hard to say goodbye,
For I loved you so,
But you are now in Heaven,
And this I surely know.
I just wanted to tell you,
I'm going to miss you,
And say "I Love You" one last time,
I hope you know how much your loved,
And I pray that peace you will find.
So goodnight my darling,
For me it's hard to part,
But you'll be forever in my memory,
And will live on in my heart. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 39 [informant] => HedderMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

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Contributed by HedderMarie on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

My Angel,
The apple of my eye,
Your passing has devastated me,
I wish you wouldn't have died.
You have left me here,
Lost and forlorn,
Nothing left with but a heart that's
broken, tattered and torn.
I hope you are happy,
In the place you are now,
That you have been saved,
And you're wings you have found.
It's hard to say goodbye,
For I loved you so,
But you are now in Heaven,
And this I surely know.
I just wanted to tell you,
I'm going to miss you,
And say "I Love You" one last time,
I hope you know how much your loved,
And I pray that peace you will find.
So goodnight my darling,
For me it's hard to part,
But you'll be forever in my memory,
And will live on in my heart.

Copyright © HedderMarie ... [ 2003-09-25 14:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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Sad but so beautifully written...Welcome to ypdc...
Jenni

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by HedderMarie on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 04:59:53 PM AEST
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Sorry everyone!....the title is call "Last Goodbye"...

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by HedderMarie on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 05:00:03 PM AEST
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Sorry everyone!....the title is called "Last Goodbye"...

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by HedderMarie on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 05:00:20 PM AEST
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Sorry everyone!....the title is called "Last Goodbye"...

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 10:08:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem dedicated to your friend. They would be glad you didn't waste the words. Thanks for sharing. Take Care.
Emma.

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