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Array ( [sid] => 23740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => i hate the way... [time] => 2003-09-24 12:35:00 [hometext] => a man sees that his marriage has gone south, so he does what any decent guy would do.....he ends it. (evil laughter) [bodytext] => i hate the way you look at me now
like i'm just another person
someone you deal with
not out of necessity or desire
but, out of habit, nothing more

i hate the way you touch me now
cold and passionless
like i'm just cutting into your sleep time
like you're doing me a favor
as if we didn't know each other at all

i hate the way you kiss me now
with someone else's tongue on your breath
scarcely hiding your disgust these days
you barely care enough to lie

i hate the way you make me feel now
like a burden, a never ending obstacle
the wall that keeps your joy at bay
you used to make me feel alive
now you just make me feel like quitting

i hate the way i feel inside you now
like an intruder, a thief
some pawing lecher
taking what should be given

i hate what you've done to me
and i hate what i've done to you

i hate you now
i guess there's no escaping it
i see no reason to lie or "play along"
i see that you don't either
and i see that there's only one thing left

divorce
'til death do us part

i hate the way you looked at me
when i started choking you
like i didn't have the right
your "how dare you" stare
just made me squeeze harder
and i hate the way you pist the bed
before you finally died
one more mess you made
that i'll have to clean up

i hate the way your dead body felt
as i dropped you in the trunk
and the whole way to the woods
i tried to cry, but couldn't
i couldn't squeeze one drop of remorse
from the stone you made of my heart

i hate the way i missed the game
just to bury you

i stared at your body
after i shoveled the first load of dirt onto you
and i scrambled for emotion
frantic for some type of sensation
but, i felt Nothing
Nothing at all

and i hate the way i still reach for you at night
only to find that you're not there
and the way i fall back asleep so fast
'cuz i still can't force myself to care

i'd probably hate the way i feel these days
if i still felt anything at all
and i'd probably hate you even more
because it's all your ***** fault

(i'm sure my emotions are still inside
somewhere that i can never reach
you made me lock it all inside
and i guess i buried you with the key

maybe you were the key
damn you, why did you stop loving me) [comments] => 6 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
i hate the way...

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i hate the way you look at me now
like i'm just another person
someone you deal with
not out of necessity or desire
but, out of habit, nothing more

i hate the way you touch me now
cold and passionless
like i'm just cutting into your sleep time
like you're doing me a favor
as if we didn't know each other at all

i hate the way you kiss me now
with someone else's tongue on your breath
scarcely hiding your disgust these days
you barely care enough to lie

i hate the way you make me feel now
like a burden, a never ending obstacle
the wall that keeps your joy at bay
you used to make me feel alive
now you just make me feel like quitting

i hate the way i feel inside you now
like an intruder, a thief
some pawing lecher
taking what should be given

i hate what you've done to me
and i hate what i've done to you

i hate you now
i guess there's no escaping it
i see no reason to lie or "play along"
i see that you don't either
and i see that there's only one thing left

divorce
'til death do us part

i hate the way you looked at me
when i started choking you
like i didn't have the right
your "how dare you" stare
just made me squeeze harder
and i hate the way you pist the bed
before you finally died
one more mess you made
that i'll have to clean up

i hate the way your dead body felt
as i dropped you in the trunk
and the whole way to the woods
i tried to cry, but couldn't
i couldn't squeeze one drop of remorse
from the stone you made of my heart

i hate the way i missed the game
just to bury you

i stared at your body
after i shoveled the first load of dirt onto you
and i scrambled for emotion
frantic for some type of sensation
but, i felt Nothing
Nothing at all

and i hate the way i still reach for you at night
only to find that you're not there
and the way i fall back asleep so fast
'cuz i still can't force myself to care

i'd probably hate the way i feel these days
if i still felt anything at all
and i'd probably hate you even more
because it's all your ***** fault

(i'm sure my emotions are still inside
somewhere that i can never reach
you made me lock it all inside
and i guess i buried you with the key

maybe you were the key
damn you, why did you stop loving me)




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-09-24 12:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 02:03:46 PM AEST
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a bit scary but powerfully written.

Kali


Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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Wow. That was damn good. Shoved me right through the eyes of the man.


Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:10:52 PM AEST
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Really very good.....can't say that I agree with the "MO"..lol...
Jenni


Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:23:08 AM AEST
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you actually gave me a glimpse of what love gone wrong can do to a man.........his desires to rid himself of pain........the pain she caused.....we can all be so cruel to one another........excelllent powerfully written piece....


Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:46:02 AM AEST
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You have an incredible way of expressing how people truly feel (but they just don't admit it) ... awesome write ... Jan


Re: i hate the way... (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:52:39 AM AEST
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Wow...what more can I say...
Emma.




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