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Array ( [sid] => 23675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => + Ashes in Your Arms + [time] => 2003-09-23 05:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You were beautiful in every single way,
from the tears, like diamonds, running down your face,
the tranquility surrounding you, consuming me,
every word spoken so softly, as if honey were flowing off the tip of your tongue,
so sweet and sincere,
so dark and lonely,
so beautiful.
Though everything you touched seemed to turn to ashes,
in your hands,
all you loved would fall to pieces,
i wanted you to hold me still,
i would catch every diamond,
falling down your dispassionate face,
taste the sweet honey,
that would once console me with your words,
even if i should turn to ashes,
in your arms. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

+ Ashes in Your Arms +

Contributed by Chanti on Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You were beautiful in every single way,
from the tears, like diamonds, running down your face,
the tranquility surrounding you, consuming me,
every word spoken so softly, as if honey were flowing off the tip of your tongue,
so sweet and sincere,
so dark and lonely,
so beautiful.
Though everything you touched seemed to turn to ashes,
in your hands,
all you loved would fall to pieces,
i wanted you to hold me still,
i would catch every diamond,
falling down your dispassionate face,
taste the sweet honey,
that would once console me with your words,
even if i should turn to ashes,
in your arms.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-09-23 05:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: + Ashes in Your Arms + (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:06:04 PM AEST
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wow.....great write!!!!

Re: + Ashes in Your Arms + (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:33:28 AM AEST
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...Wow. That took my breath away. This is gorgeous, a beautiful piece.

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